My Son's Eyes
Humorous 5-7-5 contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
I can just see the look on a little one's face when you told him that you got him from an egg carton. No wonder we could never have children. We were going about it the wrong way! We should have been looking in the egg aisle. Duh! I really got a chuckle out of this one. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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I can just see the look on a little one's face when you told him that you got him from an egg carton. No wonder we could never have children. We were going about it the wrong way! We should have been looking in the egg aisle. Duh! I really got a chuckle out of this one. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Patty. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece.
Ron
Comment from LisaMay
I think you're onto another winner with this one. It's eggsactly what I find funny anyway. People will go googaa at the cute picture for starters then they'll enjoy the son's reaction to your comment. Good idea to use the title to add more to the story.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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I think you're onto another winner with this one. It's eggsactly what I find funny anyway. People will go googaa at the cute picture for starters then they'll enjoy the son's reaction to your comment. Good idea to use the title to add more to the story.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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We'll, I guess 3rd will have to do. Yeah, I went that way with the title because I couldn't get what I wanted in there. I wanted his wife giving him the look but then people wouldn't have caught on that I was talking about their son. You know how these people don't 'get it' sometimes. LoL. Thank you, Lisa.
Ron
Comment from Sally Law
I think this is precious. What a unique baby pic and announcement. Your creative writing and talent won the contest, I think. I'm a good guesser.... Sally :))
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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I think this is precious. What a unique baby pic and announcement. Your creative writing and talent won the contest, I think. I'm a good guesser.... Sally :))
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Sally. The contest isn't actually over yet but fingers crossed. Lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly little piece.
Comment from Anne Johnston
"His look was priceless
when I claimed that we found him...
in an egg carton."
You are very creative, both with the picture and the words you have used to describe it.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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"His look was priceless
when I claimed that we found him...
in an egg carton."
You are very creative, both with the picture and the words you have used to describe it.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Anne. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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You are very welcome
