Comment from jaded831

Excellent

So far your haiku is the best. You made me laugh which was the point of the contest. I have to read them all to be fair, but your poem I feel has everything and more. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021

Thank you so much. I am so glad you like it.

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

This took me a second to figure it out and when I did, I laughed at how silly that I didn't put it together in the beginning. Good luck with the contest!
Patty

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021

Many thanks

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and imagery. It's pretty funny and on point with the contest rules. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021

Thanks

Comment from SoulRiver

Excellent

Very funny and a very original twist on eczema and fundraising. It flowed really well and delivered a delicious, humorous kick at the end. all round it was very well done and I wish you good luck for the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021

Tha ks for the great revue

Comment from Word Junkie

Excellent

Hello Poet,

You had a humorous idea but you might need to work with this a bit more. It's supposed to be 5-7-5 but your first line has six syllables. Consider something like ... to the scratch card fund ... or ? for your last line, which is awkward.

Your clever idea has real potential. Good luck!

Lana

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021

Thanks. I was sure eczema had 2 syllables but I've looked it up and you are it's 3. Maybe it is my British pronunciatio.n

reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021

Thanks. I was sure eczema had 2 syllables but I've looked it up and you are it's 3. Maybe it is my British pronunciatio.n

Comment from victor 66

Excellent

I really enjoyed the double meaning in your humorous five - seven - five Contest entry. I don't know if it is actually eczema month, but if it is, I hope they find a cure for it. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021

Thanks. I have'nt a clue whether or not there is an eczema awareness month.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

I thought I had athlete's foot but nothing cleared it up until a wise doctor told me it wasn't fungal but eczema. So that proves you can be unaware you have eczema so we need eczema awareness week.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021

Thanks