Happy Thanksgiving Day
But not for turkeys10 total reviews
Comment from NaughtieScribe
no guilt felt when I overeat. - My favorite line of your poem. I found the pace well kept and the sentiment innocent and joyful (full disclosure, I'm a sweet potato pie kinda girl - lol). I found nothing to tweak or adjust. Well Done, Well Written.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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no guilt felt when I overeat. - My favorite line of your poem. I found the pace well kept and the sentiment innocent and joyful (full disclosure, I'm a sweet potato pie kinda girl - lol). I found nothing to tweak or adjust. Well Done, Well Written.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this nice review. I've never had sweet potato pie...I'll have to try it. :)
Comment from Eunice Amero
That a great poem and you sure shared. Blessing to me with that lovel pie. It went so nicely and it is.
a lovely time and turkey for christmas i love. Thanks. Fir sharing. Good luck
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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That a great poem and you sure shared. Blessing to me with that lovel pie. It went so nicely and it is.
a lovely time and turkey for christmas i love. Thanks. Fir sharing. Good luck
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this terrific review. :)
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You are more than welcome
Comment from Derick Asher
Nice job. Not bad at all for a Thanksgiving poem. Keep up the good work, don't ever stop writing either. You only get better & better, continue to believe in yourself most importantly.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Nice job. Not bad at all for a Thanksgiving poem. Keep up the good work, don't ever stop writing either. You only get better & better, continue to believe in yourself most importantly.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Thank you for reviewing my poem.
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You are very welcome. Did you see the one I put on here?
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You are very welcome. Did you see the one I put on here?
Comment from Kooky Clown
I loved the picture and I loved the rhyme although we do not celebrate Thanksgiving here in England we save our turkey for Christmas this gives a little more time to get bigger. Kooky
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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I loved the picture and I loved the rhyme although we do not celebrate Thanksgiving here in England we save our turkey for Christmas this gives a little more time to get bigger. Kooky
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem, the bigger the turkey the better as far as I'm concerned. Thanks again and have a wonderful Christmas 🎄.
Comment from Wendy G
A lovely thanksgiving poem, celebrating the pleasures and treats, and all the festive things to do with Thanksgiving. Good rhyming poem - best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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A lovely thanksgiving poem, celebrating the pleasures and treats, and all the festive things to do with Thanksgiving. Good rhyming poem - best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this great review. I'm looking forward to the day, I hope you and your family have a safe and happy holiday. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
You describe a wonderful family on Thanksgiving Day. My favorite is having the family all home for the day and then seeing them leave toward evening to go back to their own homes. LOL Your poem has rhyme and rhythm and it's bouncy. I like bouncy poems. I also liked the picture that you chose. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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You describe a wonderful family on Thanksgiving Day. My favorite is having the family all home for the day and then seeing them leave toward evening to go back to their own homes. LOL Your poem has rhyme and rhythm and it's bouncy. I like bouncy poems. I also liked the picture that you chose. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much. I really can't wait for that pie! I hope you and your family have a terrific holiday. :)
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This it makes me hungry:"And don't forget that tasty pie,
the one that always makes me sigh.
Please have a great Thanksgiving day,
may many blessings come your way." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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This it makes me hungry:"And don't forget that tasty pie,
the one that always makes me sigh.
Please have a great Thanksgiving day,
may many blessings come your way." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
You have described everything I love about Thanksgivings perfectly! My mom makes the most wonderful dinner for us all! The stuffing is my personal favorite! Maybe you should add a verse just about that!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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You have described everything I love about Thanksgivings perfectly! My mom makes the most wonderful dinner for us all! The stuffing is my personal favorite! Maybe you should add a verse just about that!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thanks for these shining stars, much appreciated. :)
Comment from Modee
Nicely done. A great time of year for families to get together - many not seeing each other for most of the year. Hopefully no politics being yelled about across the table. haha. :)
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Nicely done. A great time of year for families to get together - many not seeing each other for most of the year. Hopefully no politics being yelled about across the table. haha. :)
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Hopefully but doubtful..:) Thank you for this terrific review. :)
Comment from SimianSavant
Well written, and does not require edits. In a couple places the prose is dense. For example: I'm excited, to say the least,
just can't wait for that turkey feast. Some of this has to be spoken in triplets to meter correctly. Most of the rest of your poem is in duples. As long as you are aware of that, you are good!
If you want to stick to straight duple meter, try something like: I am thrilled to say the least/can't wait for that Turkey feast.
Thanks for the read.
Best,
Harambe
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Well written, and does not require edits. In a couple places the prose is dense. For example: I'm excited, to say the least,
just can't wait for that turkey feast. Some of this has to be spoken in triplets to meter correctly. Most of the rest of your poem is in duples. As long as you are aware of that, you are good!
If you want to stick to straight duple meter, try something like: I am thrilled to say the least/can't wait for that Turkey feast.
Thanks for the read.
Best,
Harambe
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this helpful suggestion. I'm terribly clueless when it comes to the technical aspects of poetry. I'll look it over....thanks again.:)
