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Fine poetry and stories from the Heart

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Comment from country ranch writer
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We thank each and everyone that takes the pledge to serve and protect.They are all special folks who serve and protects our neck so we can live and learn from our mistakes each and every day. God is very proud if you.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
    Thanks country ranch writer.
    You too!
    Ricky
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Comment from prettybluebirds
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This poem is nicely done and something a bit different than your usual writing. It is clear, concise, and does great honor to those who served. My brother was in VietNam and later died of cancer caused by agent orange. He was treated badly by the government and could not even get assistance for the cancer treatments he had to have. Your writing made me think of him and I thank you for doing him honor.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
    My father was a 26-year Naval.
    Eddie was in two wars and serve them four Destroyers
    He died from cirrhosis of the liver in 1972.
    I was only 17.
    I was drafted by Nixon to go to Vietnam.
    And, I have three brothers.
    We are all considered; what back then was known as;
    "4-f"
    Flat Feet.
    Only my brother David and I were old enough but chances are one of us screwed up.
    Thanks!
    Ricky
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
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The objective correlative of this chapter in the book reminisces a rhetorical reminder and strict affirmation of societal expectations obliquely passed to the leadership of a community.

On the whole, the work highlights the primacy of the tenets of humility and fortitude in engendering a public interest oriented leadership.

The work earns its texture in its effective use of rhetorical dictums that are didactically impressed on the recipient's psyche.

Excellent work. And very typical of Doctor Ricky.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
    We got a new President at the Latter-Day Saint Church of Jesus Christ.
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 14-Nov-2021
    Remain Blessed.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
    You too Lloyd.