The Chronicals Of Bethica: The Rise
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "The Chronicles of Bethica"Abram must defeat a deadly humanoid race of beings
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Amahra, this is another fine chapter and it is very well written. The scouts really thought they were in a land with nobody there, and obviously, great was their surprise when they realised it was not so. Now what? Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Hi Amahra, this is another fine chapter and it is very well written. The scouts really thought they were in a land with nobody there, and obviously, great was their surprise when they realised it was not so. Now what? Ulla:)))
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Ulla for your review.
Comment from royowen
The scouts encounter others in the explored lands, which was disturbing, I honsely thought they had located a land without inhabitants, but it's rich in iron ore, so they'll be able to make more swords, among other things, well done, Amahra, good scribing, blessings Roy
Typo : (BEHTICA,) Bethica?
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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The scouts encounter others in the explored lands, which was disturbing, I honsely thought they had located a land without inhabitants, but it's rich in iron ore, so they'll be able to make more swords, among other things, well done, Amahra, good scribing, blessings Roy
Typo : (BEHTICA,) Bethica?
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Roy. I'll check out that typo.
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Most welcome
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Checked all seven Bethica spellings and found no typo. Can you tell me where the typo is?
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It?s in the heading Amahra,
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Ok.
Comment from forestport12
Nothing like a nice sweet taste of fruit to win over the crowd. It reminded me of the moment in the movie, "Dancing with Wolves," when Kevin Costner introduced refined sugar to the Indians. Love the balance between show and tell and the well-timed dialogue. You know how to keep me interested.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Nothing like a nice sweet taste of fruit to win over the crowd. It reminded me of the moment in the movie, "Dancing with Wolves," when Kevin Costner introduced refined sugar to the Indians. Love the balance between show and tell and the well-timed dialogue. You know how to keep me interested.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked the chapter.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Fantasy Fiction, A chapter in the book The Chronicals? (Chronicles) Of Bethica: The Rise, speaks about the chronicles of Behtica? (Bethica), the neighbouring tribes; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this and nice reviewing this legible post on white background, post more, fast, time is limited, precious, rare (good) gift, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123300/N21. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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This Fantasy Fiction, A chapter in the book The Chronicals? (Chronicles) Of Bethica: The Rise, speaks about the chronicles of Behtica? (Bethica), the neighbouring tribes; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this and nice reviewing this legible post on white background, post more, fast, time is limited, precious, rare (good) gift, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123300/N21. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
How is Olatunji going to get out of this one? I fear it is not good, but he is a main character. I am enjoying this very much and can't wait for the next installment. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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How is Olatunji going to get out of this one? I fear it is not good, but he is a main character. I am enjoying this very much and can't wait for the next installment. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your review, Barbara.
Comment from AJ McCall
I think missed the last chapter but man was this one INTENSE! So there are humanoid creatures already inhabiting the land? And another tribe? I love the names you give them, amahra! And I have to say that scene with the head scouts talking to the bearded people (even the women, lol) was hilarious! I'll try and keep up with more of the chapters. This one was great. Hopefully, Olatunji doesn't get hurt. I'm so worried. Can't wait til the next chapter!!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I think missed the last chapter but man was this one INTENSE! So there are humanoid creatures already inhabiting the land? And another tribe? I love the names you give them, amahra! And I have to say that scene with the head scouts talking to the bearded people (even the women, lol) was hilarious! I'll try and keep up with more of the chapters. This one was great. Hopefully, Olatunji doesn't get hurt. I'm so worried. Can't wait til the next chapter!!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Wow! Thank you so much, AJ. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. And yep! bearded women. LOL..and thank you for the stars.
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LOL. You're very welcome!!! ;)
