Comment from Ridz1

Average

Many can really relate to this poem. I think the rhyme scheme can be used in more effective way to create an impact on the reader. I had to read it twice to get a grip on the subject.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021

Each and every writer here at Fanstory.
(Both the young and also the old)
Each have their own unique style and way.
I never rate anybody less than five stars.
Yes, and if I decide to?
Well, then I won't read their work.
I'm not here to preach or teach.
But I have been told so.
C.Lucas.
Over 10 years ago.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Carlos' girl

Excellent

I like this poetic writing about the beautiful Heather. She is lilting and lyrical. The artwork and background illustration is pretty and perfect. Nice job writer.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021

Thanks Carlos' girl.
I'm glad this season 2 tell your day with a Field of Dreams and Heather!
Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by Carlos' girl on 13-Nov-2021

Youre welcome