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Freedom Given

From soldiers then and now

6 total reviews 
Comment from AprilViolet
Exceptional
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This is the perfect acrostic poem in my opinion. And expertly written if I do say so myself. Love the message and the picture used as well. Worthy of a six star rating! Bravo!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
    Thank you so much for this sterling review... it makes my night. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Exceptional
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This is such a wonderful tribute to those who have and are currently serving our country. They deserve all our respect and thanks! Excellent job!!!!!!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
    Thank you, I completely agree. I appreciate this great 6 star review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Excellent
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A fine tribute to all soldiers around the world who take on the battle and lose their lives so that we may be free, we will always have wars because there will always be greedy tyrants in this world, a fine acrostic, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Thank you for this nice review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from pookietoo
Good
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Hey, this is not a rhyming poem. Will you please change it? I would appreciate it. It is for my contest. Have a wonderful night and keep smiling. :)

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Hi, I'm not sure what you want me to change. It's an acrostic and it rhymes, just as much as the other entries....I'm confused. The prompt asked for an acrostic rhyming poem, I think thats what I did. Thank you.
    Hi again. Respectfully, your prompt said a rhyming poem, it did not state that every line must rhyme. If you want to change the prompt to include that, then I will withdraw my entry, as I do not intend to change it. Thank you.
reply by pookietoo on 12-Nov-2021
    I would like every line to rhyme. :)
reply by pookietoo on 13-Nov-2021
    Okay. I can't change the prompt now to say rhyme every line.
Comment from J.Lancaster
Excellent
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Expertly said. I like how you made it an acronym (is that the right word?) and kept a good rhythm to it at the same time. Wonderful message too. The last line really is a question to think about. Where would we be without our brave soldiers? Many people who scorn them rarely ever think about this.

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Thank you for this fine review, l really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Sally Law
Excellent
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Thank you! I really appreciate this wonderful poem and the apprection of our veterans all year. I come from a military family where much was given and sacrificed for freedom. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Thank you so much for this terrific review. :)