Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Revenge - Chap 17"Evil stalks the dynamic crime team
23 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This clears up a lot. I thought those women might be FBI nut I wasn't sure. If Samantha makes a play for Garth, I don't think Allie would be at all pleased. It is good to know they are all on the team with the good guys.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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This clears up a lot. I thought those women might be FBI nut I wasn't sure. If Samantha makes a play for Garth, I don't think Allie would be at all pleased. It is good to know they are all on the team with the good guys.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your time, your thoughts on the story and your support.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from dmt1967
I think this is also a very good chapter. I like the dialogue and thought it was both entertaining and realistic. I liked the interaction between characters as well. Thank you for sharing and take care.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I think this is also a very good chapter. I like the dialogue and thought it was both entertaining and realistic. I liked the interaction between characters as well. Thank you for sharing and take care.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, Samantha she is la femme fatale and she works clean too:) "
"You want me to believe a beautiful woman meets you for the first time, seduces you, drugs you, and leaves you naked in your squad car. Oh yeah, I forgot to mention she cleared out the entire office. There's not even a paper clip on the floor." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Wow, Samantha she is la femme fatale and she works clean too:) "
"You want me to believe a beautiful woman meets you for the first time, seduces you, drugs you, and leaves you naked in your squad car. Oh yeah, I forgot to mention she cleared out the entire office. There's not even a paper clip on the floor." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I hope I am doing this story justice, because you and so many who continue to follow deserve a good story. I thank you for your friendship and your reviews.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
Another great chapter in your story. I think I read the wrong chapter first tonight but it really doesn't matter as I loved them both anyway. I'm truly enjoying this story and can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Another great chapter in your story. I think I read the wrong chapter first tonight but it really doesn't matter as I loved them both anyway. I'm truly enjoying this story and can't wait for more. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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My apologies for responding with a thank you so late, but know I truly appreciate your time and the review.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Sam plays hardball, doesn't she! Does her Director boss have a name? Or maybe you're not telling us, just yet. It's obviously not Garth's team, but it appears to be the same agency.
Here are the revisions I suggest:
Sorry, bosses orders."
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Sorry, boss's orders."
I thought for sure when we last spoke you wanted me to get the goods on this guy."
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I thought for sure, when we last spoke, you wanted me to get the goods on this guy."
"He better not miss ...
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"He better not miss, ...
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This is a very intriguing story.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Sam plays hardball, doesn't she! Does her Director boss have a name? Or maybe you're not telling us, just yet. It's obviously not Garth's team, but it appears to be the same agency.
Here are the revisions I suggest:
Sorry, bosses orders."
-->
Sorry, boss's orders."
I thought for sure when we last spoke you wanted me to get the goods on this guy."
-->
I thought for sure, when we last spoke, you wanted me to get the goods on this guy."
"He better not miss ...
-->
"He better not miss, ...
***
This is a very intriguing story.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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My apologies for responding with a thank you so late, but know I truly appreciate your time and the review.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from robyn corum
Carol,
Ouch. I am not sure it's a good idea to be making it public about those photos. That is so scary. I knew it would eventually get out - but wasn't expecting it to be by the granddaughter. Good job!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Carol,
Ouch. I am not sure it's a good idea to be making it public about those photos. That is so scary. I knew it would eventually get out - but wasn't expecting it to be by the granddaughter. Good job!
Comment Written 13-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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She lives on the edge...much like Allie. I guess to live and work in a man's world you have to throw as many punches as you get or else make the knockout first.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
I've gone back and back read some of your chapters, but am not caught up. Glad to read another chapter in your intriguing tale. Lots of strong willed characters.
Have a great weekend,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I've gone back and back read some of your chapters, but am not caught up. Glad to read another chapter in your intriguing tale. Lots of strong willed characters.
Have a great weekend,
Rhonda
Comment Written 13-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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My apologies for responding with a thank you so late, but know I truly appreciate your time and the review.
Hugs, Carol
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That?s okay, good to hear from you!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I loved the part with Welcher, Lol, I could picture it in my mind. But it wasn't good that James recognised Sam's perfume, or was that deliberate? I'm glad that Sam in going to meet Hank and Emmy. Another amazing chapter, dear friend. I'm off to read another now. Love and hugs! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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I loved the part with Welcher, Lol, I could picture it in my mind. But it wasn't good that James recognised Sam's perfume, or was that deliberate? I'm glad that Sam in going to meet Hank and Emmy. Another amazing chapter, dear friend. I'm off to read another now. Love and hugs! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 13-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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My apologies for responding with a thank you so late, but know I truly appreciate your time and the review.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, we got a lot of information here. Sam, is treading on thin ice, in more ways than one. But, the readers know she is dealing with real slime so they should be on her side and willing cut her some slack.
Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Hmm, we got a lot of information here. Sam, is treading on thin ice, in more ways than one. But, the readers know she is dealing with real slime so they should be on her side and willing cut her some slack.
Well done.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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My apologies for responding with a thank you so late, but know I truly appreciate your time and the review.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
For me, some of the pieces a coming together as I begin to understand the connection between some of the characters. I'm particularly excited about the part Marian is playing, and wonder how she is connected to Sam. Thank you for giving me this story to disappear into and momentarily take time out from reality.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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For me, some of the pieces a coming together as I begin to understand the connection between some of the characters. I'm particularly excited about the part Marian is playing, and wonder how she is connected to Sam. Thank you for giving me this story to disappear into and momentarily take time out from reality.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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My apologies for responding with a thank you so late, but know I truly appreciate your time and the review.
Hugs, Carol
