Running Blind
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Comment from Sankey
As usual, another great read. Can't wait to see some more of this and where it is all headed. Just a couple of possible spags on this round.(his)own vessel;
"Set you(r) sails
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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As usual, another great read. Can't wait to see some more of this and where it is all headed. Just a couple of possible spags on this round.(his)own vessel;
"Set you(r) sails
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the gift of you and the added stats!
Blessings always,
Sally :))
Comment from Judy Lawless
A lot of interesting stuff going on in this chapter, Sally. The painting has changed hands again and Alfanzi is on the loose again. Can't help but wonder how many more deaths he will be responsible for before this is over. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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A lot of interesting stuff going on in this chapter, Sally. The painting has changed hands again and Alfanzi is on the loose again. Can't help but wonder how many more deaths he will be responsible for before this is over. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter. It is much appreciated. Blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from Shirley McLain
Liked the chapter. It's easy to read with a smooth flow. Your characters are realistic and you keep me reading, wanting to find out more. You did a great job. Have a wonderful afternoon. Shirley
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Liked the chapter. It's easy to read with a smooth flow. Your characters are realistic and you keep me reading, wanting to find out more. You did a great job. Have a wonderful afternoon. Shirley
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments, dear Shirley. Blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from RGstar
Sally. Yes, away most of the time, but Good to come in to read this. Professional, tight, and reliable.
A good piece of writing. There is an opening for this genre with Mastery sadly gone, and how well you command.
The characters, yes, will take me a little time to fully realize them because just getting into the story, but everything fits nicely, and feels right. I am settling into this film.
One thing:
"This is my life now," Suzy assured. "I may not be a cop, but I might as well be. I can't think of anything I would rather be doing than marrying Lieutenant Miles Jean-Baptiste.
I thought Miles, would be enough rather than the whole name, as she is marrying him, so she knows him well, so unless to really cement her statement with stronger emotion, it would have been more natural to just call him by his first name in that situation as she knows him well.
What do you think?
Ok Sal, so good to see you writing. I have no doubt this will be a success, because I believe in you, and I know you believe in yourself.
Bravo.
Best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Sally. Yes, away most of the time, but Good to come in to read this. Professional, tight, and reliable.
A good piece of writing. There is an opening for this genre with Mastery sadly gone, and how well you command.
The characters, yes, will take me a little time to fully realize them because just getting into the story, but everything fits nicely, and feels right. I am settling into this film.
One thing:
"This is my life now," Suzy assured. "I may not be a cop, but I might as well be. I can't think of anything I would rather be doing than marrying Lieutenant Miles Jean-Baptiste.
I thought Miles, would be enough rather than the whole name, as she is marrying him, so she knows him well, so unless to really cement her statement with stronger emotion, it would have been more natural to just call him by his first name in that situation as she knows him well.
What do you think?
Ok Sal, so good to see you writing. I have no doubt this will be a success, because I believe in you, and I know you believe in yourself.
Bravo.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and complimentary stars! Dear RG, the improvements are always welcome and I gladly made the change. I haven't been writing very long, only three years, and to grow in my craft is my desire. Thank you for believing in me.
Sending you my best today and blessings always,
Sal :))
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Wow, that painting came to light in this chapter. But as the story goes, no one knows where it is, other than the one who has the painting. Hopefully they live long enough to find out where it is hidden.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Wow, that painting came to light in this chapter. But as the story goes, no one knows where it is, other than the one who has the painting. Hopefully they live long enough to find out where it is hidden.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments. It?s so appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from damommy
Alfanzi's free and will be coming around. Hopefully, not during the wedding. I can't imagine the fear everyone must feel, not knowing what he'll do next. Let's get them safely married.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Alfanzi's free and will be coming around. Hopefully, not during the wedding. I can't imagine the fear everyone must feel, not knowing what he'll do next. Let's get them safely married.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Oh, thank you so much for the wonderful review and generous six star rating. I?m so very honored and blessed. So glad you enjoyed it. Blessings always, Sally XOs
Comment from prettybluebirds
Quite a list of characters you have in this novel. I can't recall reading any of this one before but maybe I did. I love the unique names of some of the people in this novel, as well as the addition of the dogs. Your dialogue is smooth and makes the story easy and enjoyable to read and follow. I will keep an eye out for more of this story. Great writing.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Quite a list of characters you have in this novel. I can't recall reading any of this one before but maybe I did. I love the unique names of some of the people in this novel, as well as the addition of the dogs. Your dialogue is smooth and makes the story easy and enjoyable to read and follow. I will keep an eye out for more of this story. Great writing.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind stars. I?m so glad to see you and for stopping by. I hope you will come again. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally :))
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Okay, we have Eugene Izard dead and apparently the last person to see him alive is Detective Mike Lembowsky. We have Tony Alfanzi with a million dollars and on a boat. Not sure to where. We have a wedding that Tony could and probably will cause problems at. Everything seems to be going good.
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Okay, we have Eugene Izard dead and apparently the last person to see him alive is Detective Mike Lembowsky. We have Tony Alfanzi with a million dollars and on a boat. Not sure to where. We have a wedding that Tony could and probably will cause problems at. Everything seems to be going good.
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind comments. Both are so appreciated. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from Ben Colder
Is that place you mentioned in Arkansas, anywhere near Goose Feathers? Lots happening up there in that part of the country. However, I shall get Sally and King to sniff out the bad ones. Good one Sal. My blessings to you.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Is that place you mentioned in Arkansas, anywhere near Goose Feathers? Lots happening up there in that part of the country. However, I shall get Sally and King to sniff out the bad ones. Good one Sal. My blessings to you.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and generous six star rating. It is most appreciated. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter 26 - Running Blind, in the book Running Blind, of the Mystery and Crime Fiction, speaks about preliminary autopsy: Ken Washburn makes it official; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this posted on legible white background, happy reviewing this, my dear writer post more, fast, time is limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth. ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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This Chapter 26 - Running Blind, in the book Running Blind, of the Mystery and Crime Fiction, speaks about preliminary autopsy: Ken Washburn makes it official; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this posted on legible white background, happy reviewing this, my dear writer post more, fast, time is limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind comments. It is most appreciated. Sending long my very best to you all, Sally :))
