Running Blind
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Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
With the wedding coming up, I think we're closing in on the Grand Finale. I doubt that Tony will spoil things. He's got his million dollars, and a sailboat. If he's smart, he'll vamoose. Exit, Stage right! I was thinking that Spencer Whitehead would kill him.
But bottom line, there's no way you're going to let Mr. Alfanzi get away. So my guess is one last attempt on the Blind Girl's life. And Jackson will be the hero.
Nicely penned! Fine writing, as usual.
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Hi Sally,
With the wedding coming up, I think we're closing in on the Grand Finale. I doubt that Tony will spoil things. He's got his million dollars, and a sailboat. If he's smart, he'll vamoose. Exit, Stage right! I was thinking that Spencer Whitehead would kill him.
But bottom line, there's no way you're going to let Mr. Alfanzi get away. So my guess is one last attempt on the Blind Girl's life. And Jackson will be the hero.
Nicely penned! Fine writing, as usual.
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 20-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for the exceptional review and shiny stars! Dear Kim, you brighten my day and add joy to my writing. I always feel so well received. Sending you and yours my very best today as always,
Sal :)) XOs
Comment from Bill Schott
It's exciting feeling there is another shoe to drop yet. The Angel of Death couldn't be a spirit as the rest of the story is true-to-life. I'm figuring one of the cast is doing double-duty as a loose-ends-taker-carer-of. My money is currently on Pastor Henry.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2021
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It's exciting feeling there is another shoe to drop yet. The Angel of Death couldn't be a spirit as the rest of the story is true-to-life. I'm figuring one of the cast is doing double-duty as a loose-ends-taker-carer-of. My money is currently on Pastor Henry.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and insightful comments. The six stars are such a blessing. Sending you my very best, Bill,
Sal :)) xos
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm fifty reviews behind after my three-day stint in the hospital, but I'm doing my best to catch up. I apologize for the quickie cookie-cutter review and hopefully things will we be back to normal soon. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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I'm fifty reviews behind after my three-day stint in the hospital, but I'm doing my best to catch up. I apologize for the quickie cookie-cutter review and hopefully things will we be back to normal soon. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
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No worries! Miss ya and praying for ya. Thanks for stopping to visit the Blind Girl and the gang! Blessings always,
Sal XOs....get well soon.... :))
Comment from Janetsue
I love a story that concludes with a wedding...especially when it is not the final chapter of a book and more excitement is to come. I also like the mention of a gifted dog to be trained for policework. Nicely done, Sally! xo
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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I love a story that concludes with a wedding...especially when it is not the final chapter of a book and more excitement is to come. I also like the mention of a gifted dog to be trained for policework. Nicely done, Sally! xo
Comment Written 17-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and beautiful stars. It?s such a blessing to me. Thank you so much again and have a lovely week.
Sending along my very best as always, dear Janet,
Sally Xo
Comment from Cindy Warren
Oh-oh, I'm afraid Tony will not be able to resist showing up at that wedding. He'll be planning on showing up a few other places he's not welcome too. Hope they catch him soon.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Oh-oh, I'm afraid Tony will not be able to resist showing up at that wedding. He'll be planning on showing up a few other places he's not welcome too. Hope they catch him soon.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and insightful comments. Stay on! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from BethShelby
I'm continuing to enjoy this story. It is full of new intrigue and just when some things seem to be working out, something else happens. You make everything seem so real with great dialogue and a plot that keeps us coming back for more. Excellent writing.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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I'm continuing to enjoy this story. It is full of new intrigue and just when some things seem to be working out, something else happens. You make everything seem so real with great dialogue and a plot that keeps us coming back for more. Excellent writing.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much very kind of you in my book chapter. It?s so appreciated. Sending all my best day to you and yours as always, Sally XOs
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Oh, Sally - I had hoped to read this from the beginning, but time is like a run-away horse and keeps bucking me off. This part is fascinating. I Iove that you are the main character!! This was so good that I will lasso that horse and get him to take me to the beginning of the story!! Good stuff...
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Oh, Sally - I had hoped to read this from the beginning, but time is like a run-away horse and keeps bucking me off. This part is fascinating. I Iove that you are the main character!! This was so good that I will lasso that horse and get him to take me to the beginning of the story!! Good stuff...
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review, dear Sherry. So glad you like. I?m delighted. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Superb post, Sal, with loads going on. I don't know, but I can't see Tony Alfanzi showing up now he has that million dollars in his bank. He's away free and wouldn't want to be caught and put back in prison. The wedding will go ahead fine, I think!! I'm glad Ken will be joining them now. Well done, Sal, another excellent chapter! :)) Sandra xxx
I'll be on holiday from next Monday through to the 5th December, so I'll haave to catch up when I get back, unless you post this Sunday. xxxx
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Superb post, Sal, with loads going on. I don't know, but I can't see Tony Alfanzi showing up now he has that million dollars in his bank. He's away free and wouldn't want to be caught and put back in prison. The wedding will go ahead fine, I think!! I'm glad Ken will be joining them now. Well done, Sal, another excellent chapter! :)) Sandra xxx
I'll be on holiday from next Monday through to the 5th December, so I'll haave to catch up when I get back, unless you post this Sunday. xxxx
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, dear Sandra. I?m delighted! Thank you for letting me know about your holiday schedule. I just had a death in the family, and next week my kids are coming down for Thanksgiving along with the grandkids. I will be posting this Sunday though. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs
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I am so sorry for your loss, Sal. it's always upsetting even when it's expected. I hope you enjoy your Thanksgiving with your kids and grandchildren, I'm sure it will be lovely for you. We don't have a Thanksgiving here, but we do have a Harvest Festival where we give thanks for the harvest. Hugs and love, my friend. xxx
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Thank you, Samdra. Blessings to you always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from lyenochka
Wow, what a lot of very different scenes in this post. There's our great forensic anthropologist meeting with Mike and I hope that there aren't anyone else's fingerprints unless "Death" has fingerprints. Then there's the conversation about Kens' new job. Then there's that awful villain appearing to get his way with a million dollars! And then there are wedding preparations. I thought the bloggers' advice about seating was humorous!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Wow, what a lot of very different scenes in this post. There's our great forensic anthropologist meeting with Mike and I hope that there aren't anyone else's fingerprints unless "Death" has fingerprints. Then there's the conversation about Kens' new job. Then there's that awful villain appearing to get his way with a million dollars! And then there are wedding preparations. I thought the bloggers' advice about seating was humorous!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind comments. I?m so glad you enjoyed it. Yes, a wedding must be all about the bride and the groom and their happiness. No arguments at the table. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Curiouser and curiouser! Just who IS the mysterious Dr. Ziegler? And how will the trap close on Tony Alfanzi?
Who was the mysterious apparition who felled Eugene Izard -- a figment of his imagination, or someone more sinister? If yes, how could that individual be sure their charade would lead to Izard's sudden demise?
A few suggestions for revisions:
...this time dressed in a faded sweatshirt and flip-flops.
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...this time sporting a faded sweatshirt and flip-flops.
OR
...this time dressed in a faded sweatshirt, jeans/cutoff shorts (?) and flip-flops.
[otherwise it gives me an image of a pantless Ed, or an Ed in his tidy whities]
"I hope I never set eyes on you again Alfanzi,"
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"I hope I never set eyes on you again, Alfanzi,"
The three men parted without so much as a handshake.
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The three men parted, without so much as a handshake.
For those of us at Lafayette Township PD, we were concerned about one thing as the wedding of Miles and Suzy approached:
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For those of us at Lafayette Township PD, we were concerned about one thing, as the wedding of Miles and Suzy approached:
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I look forward to the wedding of Suzy Fleming and Detective Mike Lembowsky!
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Curiouser and curiouser! Just who IS the mysterious Dr. Ziegler? And how will the trap close on Tony Alfanzi?
Who was the mysterious apparition who felled Eugene Izard -- a figment of his imagination, or someone more sinister? If yes, how could that individual be sure their charade would lead to Izard's sudden demise?
A few suggestions for revisions:
...this time dressed in a faded sweatshirt and flip-flops.
-->
...this time sporting a faded sweatshirt and flip-flops.
OR
...this time dressed in a faded sweatshirt, jeans/cutoff shorts (?) and flip-flops.
[otherwise it gives me an image of a pantless Ed, or an Ed in his tidy whities]
"I hope I never set eyes on you again Alfanzi,"
-->
"I hope I never set eyes on you again, Alfanzi,"
The three men parted without so much as a handshake.
-->
The three men parted, without so much as a handshake.
For those of us at Lafayette Township PD, we were concerned about one thing as the wedding of Miles and Suzy approached:
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For those of us at Lafayette Township PD, we were concerned about one thing, as the wedding of Miles and Suzy approached:
***
I look forward to the wedding of Suzy Fleming and Detective Mike Lembowsky!
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. I?m so glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate the critique as I always do and I made the improvements. I appreciate you so much.
Susie Fleming is marrying Lieutenant Miles Jean-Baptiste. Detective Mike Lembowsky is single. I?m still hopeful for him too. Maybe in the upcoming book?.
Sending along my very best to you and yours as always,
Sally XOs
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You're very welcome, as always, Sally. It's my pleasure.
Woops! I got my law enforcement officers mixed up. Good thing I wasn't sending the happy couple a wedding card! Love and blessings, Mary Kay xoxo
