Winter's Magic
Nature brings us...11 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Your poem paints a wintery scene, but the reader feels warm reading it. I enjoy a poem like yours that sparks good feelings. The picture compliments your beautiful words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Your poem paints a wintery scene, but the reader feels warm reading it. I enjoy a poem like yours that sparks good feelings. The picture compliments your beautiful words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a charming monorhyme about winter and the holiday season which is quickly coming upon us. You did a great job with rhyme and rhythm. The picture that you chose enhances your poem nicely. It's a beautiful winter scene with the snow falling down. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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This is a charming monorhyme about winter and the holiday season which is quickly coming upon us. You did a great job with rhyme and rhythm. The picture that you chose enhances your poem nicely. It's a beautiful winter scene with the snow falling down. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you, I appreciate this very nice review. :)
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful words in your mono-rhyme poetry, and the thoughts expressed flow naturally. My only suggestion might be to break it into four line stanzas and slightly larger font, for ease on the reader's eyes ... your image is beautiful. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Beautiful words in your mono-rhyme poetry, and the thoughts expressed flow naturally. My only suggestion might be to break it into four line stanzas and slightly larger font, for ease on the reader's eyes ... your image is beautiful. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this great review.. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Very beautifully written and rhymed. It makes me excited for winter, which is just around the corner. This is not an easy contest, but thus was well done...good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Very beautifully written and rhymed. It makes me excited for winter, which is just around the corner. This is not an easy contest, but thus was well done...good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this six star review....I love it. :)
Comment from SimianSavant
A well executed, seasonally appropriate poem. You touched on a number of different images that fit well. One very small edit:
his wonders, that brings smiles to ones face => should read "one's face".
Thanks for the read!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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A well executed, seasonally appropriate poem. You touched on a number of different images that fit well. One very small edit:
his wonders, that brings smiles to ones face => should read "one's face".
Thanks for the read!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and the correction, both are appreciated. :)
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of the poem reminisces a relay race seemingly embarked upon by the seasons and the impact their prevalence brings to bear on the people.
The work highlights the dynamics of the relay race as it moves from autumn to winter and an eventual culmination in Christmas celebrations.
The work earns its texture through its specification compliance as a mono rhyme poem; with further embellishments seasoned with similes, personifications, assonances, metaphors, and alliterations.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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The objective correlative of the poem reminisces a relay race seemingly embarked upon by the seasons and the impact their prevalence brings to bear on the people.
The work highlights the dynamics of the relay race as it moves from autumn to winter and an eventual culmination in Christmas celebrations.
The work earns its texture through its specification compliance as a mono rhyme poem; with further embellishments seasoned with similes, personifications, assonances, metaphors, and alliterations.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thank you for this indepth review...I find it very interesting. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the winter and you also added a little Christmas cheer here which made this poem uplifting and magical, great rhymes and good luck with the contest.
Just one suggestion:
Do you mean (Jack) Frost here?
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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You brought the winter and you also added a little Christmas cheer here which made this poem uplifting and magical, great rhymes and good luck with the contest.
Just one suggestion:
Do you mean (Jack) Frost here?
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Hahaha....Jake is his little brother I think! Thanks so much for this nice review and for pointing out my mistake. :)
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I think your poem is doing well in the contest, good luck x x x
Comment from Aspiring2Write
This is a beautiful poem. Well written. Flows like winter's magic. Word choices were outstanding. Can't wait to read more of your poems.
Yours Truly,
Joshua Law
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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This is a beautiful poem. Well written. Flows like winter's magic. Word choices were outstanding. Can't wait to read more of your poems.
Yours Truly,
Joshua Law
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for your kind words. :)
Comment from RodG
Your poem does a lovely job of describing the transition from Fall to Winter and all the benefits derived from that season. An excellent job of choosing rhymes and using encampment. This poem is a strong contest entry. Rod
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Your poem does a lovely job of describing the transition from Fall to Winter and all the benefits derived from that season. An excellent job of choosing rhymes and using encampment. This poem is a strong contest entry. Rod
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from country ranch writer
This beautifully put together.I love it and it's poetry in motin it is more than a twenty whole cents.You have gone above and beyond for this creative poem God bless!
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reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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This beautifully put together.I love it and it's poetry in motin it is more than a twenty whole cents.You have gone above and beyond for this creative poem God bless!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this wonderful review. :)
