The Party From Hell
When Satan Came to the Party all hell broke loose3 total reviews
Comment from Frank Malley
Clever, well-executed and funny. Plus, a setup for a sequel. Not quite Faust, or The Devil and Daniel Webster, but a genuine grin-maker. I liked the mud-slinging this poem does at corporate entities.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Clever, well-executed and funny. Plus, a setup for a sequel. Not quite Faust, or The Devil and Daniel Webster, but a genuine grin-maker. I liked the mud-slinging this poem does at corporate entities.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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yeah glad you got the corporate reference
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Sam Adams woke up
With two naked demon lovers,
In his arms,
With the mother of all hangovers.' Even in this serious situation, this made me smile. I always question those who seek to 'sell their souls' for the chance at such a short spate of success in life. After all, we have an eternity to live through after. Nothing in this world is worth giving up one's soul for. But, people do it. A real well written piece much enjoyed and a fabulous entry for the competition love Meia xx
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Sam Adams woke up
With two naked demon lovers,
In his arms,
With the mother of all hangovers.' Even in this serious situation, this made me smile. I always question those who seek to 'sell their souls' for the chance at such a short spate of success in life. After all, we have an eternity to live through after. Nothing in this world is worth giving up one's soul for. But, people do it. A real well written piece much enjoyed and a fabulous entry for the competition love Meia xx
Comment Written 09-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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thanks, glad you liked it.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
This work reminisces thé dictum: thé wages of sin is death.
Thé work highlights its protagonist on a spree to approximate thé concept of sin in his mèrry go round and as à corollary facilitate his imminent death.
Thé work earns its texture through à prompt métamorphoses of his yeanings.
Commendable work, albeit in projection of à specious character like Satan. How � wish it were otherwise disposéd.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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This work reminisces thé dictum: thé wages of sin is death.
Thé work highlights its protagonist on a spree to approximate thé concept of sin in his mèrry go round and as à corollary facilitate his imminent death.
Thé work earns its texture through à prompt métamorphoses of his yeanings.
Commendable work, albeit in projection of à specious character like Satan. How � wish it were otherwise disposéd.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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glad you liked my poem.
