Each Stranger's Kiss
A man and a woman kiss.4 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
This is a wonderful flash fiction. And they lived happily ever after. I'm happy for Lisa and Burt and I'm a total stranger! Yes, we can certainly break the ice with a kiss. Nice work.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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This is a wonderful flash fiction. And they lived happily ever after. I'm happy for Lisa and Burt and I'm a total stranger! Yes, we can certainly break the ice with a kiss. Nice work.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
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Xoxo you are welcome Raul
Comment from NaughtieScribe
I like the sentiment of your short story. It can be so hard to relay an intriguing theme with so few words, which you've done well. However it is very important to proof for spags and imagery. In short works such as this minor errors or more noticeable. With a few tweaks this could be a sixxer. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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I like the sentiment of your short story. It can be so hard to relay an intriguing theme with so few words, which you've done well. However it is very important to proof for spags and imagery. In short works such as this minor errors or more noticeable. With a few tweaks this could be a sixxer. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from pookietoo
A great entry for this contest. I like all of the paragraphs. I wish you lots of luck in this contest. Have a wonderful night. Best wishes. Keep smiling.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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A great entry for this contest. I like all of the paragraphs. I wish you lots of luck in this contest. Have a wonderful night. Best wishes. Keep smiling.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
Comment from rspoet
This is a very good story for the flash contest.
A few typos:
"I don'[d] even know you, but I kissed you," Lisa said. t
"I [l]now, but I liked it. You[r'e] attractive." Burt said. k you're
Otherwise, nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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This is a very good story for the flash contest.
A few typos:
"I don'[d] even know you, but I kissed you," Lisa said. t
"I [l]now, but I liked it. You[r'e] attractive." Burt said. k you're
Otherwise, nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thank you! I have fixed the mistakes. Thank you for your help!
