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Implanted Inspiration

Strangers Encouragement

7 total reviews 
Comment from NaughtieScribe
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

It can be very difficult to craft a well written theme in so few words. You've Mastered It. I found the read engaging and the ending unexpected and endearing. Well Written, Well Done.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2021

Comment from Annmuma
Excellent
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Great writing. Unique, fun, believable and well presented. Love the imagery and the picture to enhance it. You were successful in telling a complete story in 100 words or less. Good luck in the contest. You have my vote! ann

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
    Thanks for your review, and of course your vote. Much appreciated.
Comment from Wendy G
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A very clever entry, twisting the competition so adroitly. Perhaps he will win ... but maybe you will! Very creative! You have written it clearly and well, so best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
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This Fiction, 100 Word Dash writing prompt entry, speaks about implanted inspiration, strangers encouragement; sure, you saw a flicker of inspiration; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more, fast for precious time, dear, Worship Month November. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021

Comment from Modee
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I love this. So much said in so few words. Perfect artwork and such a surprise ending. That dude had to be so surprised at that kiss. haha. NICE! There has to be another chapter.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
    Thanks for your review and the six stars. Next chapter from his POV perhaps; and the success of his new book.
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent flash fiction for the contest.
I'm sure many dream of such inspiration,
but few can write about it.
Excellent surprise at the the end that brings a smile.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
    Thanks for your review. I could do with that kind of inspiration at times.
reply by rspoet on 07-Nov-2021
    That problem is, if you're a male and you did that, you'd likely be charge with sexual harassment.
    Such is the new world. LOL
Comment from lancellot
Excellent
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Wow, did she just sexually assault that man? The shame, the horror, where are the police when you need them. I could go on but why. This is nicely written and thought it was funny. Where were women like that when I had writer's block?

Good luck.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
    Women like that are never around when you need them lol. Glad you enjoyed the story.