First Miss
First kiss opportunity25 total reviews
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Wondered how many guys have been in that situation? I do not know how many but surely I was. Thanks for this poem on kisses and all the very best in the contest, Kit.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Wondered how many guys have been in that situation? I do not know how many but surely I was. Thanks for this poem on kisses and all the very best in the contest, Kit.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the review, Kit. I'm right there with you.
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Welcome, Sir
Comment from pookietoo
A nice poem for this contest. Way to rhyme it. A very cute photo of the kids. It looks like it is raining in the photo. Gave a wonderful night and keep smiling.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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A nice poem for this contest. Way to rhyme it. A very cute photo of the kids. It looks like it is raining in the photo. Gave a wonderful night and keep smiling.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Pookie. The picture is probably better than the poem.
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Welcome.
Comment from LisaMay
The first kiss is indeed a memorable moment for both parties. In my day, it was always the boy who made the first move. Your poem seems to be in a similar time frame - I think things move a lot faster these days and girls can be quite forward. Your poem has an air of sweet innocence and restraint about it.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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The first kiss is indeed a memorable moment for both parties. In my day, it was always the boy who made the first move. Your poem seems to be in a similar time frame - I think things move a lot faster these days and girls can be quite forward. Your poem has an air of sweet innocence and restraint about it.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Thanks, LisaMay. You are right. Things do move a little faster today.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a delightful poem and I'm reminded of how innocent we are at that age. Of course, children as young and sweet as those in the picture are just perfect in their affection. I really like this. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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This is a delightful poem and I'm reminded of how innocent we are at that age. Of course, children as young and sweet as those in the picture are just perfect in their affection. I really like this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Mary. There's not so much innocence around today.
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You are right about that.
Comment from MissMerri
Hahahaha... obviously written by a guy, but very clever and cute. I enjoyed this and also the memories it brought back. (Long, long ago memories!) I hope this does well in the contest. I liked it a lot. MM
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Hahahaha... obviously written by a guy, but very clever and cute. I enjoyed this and also the memories it brought back. (Long, long ago memories!) I hope this does well in the contest. I liked it a lot. MM
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Thanks, MM. That means a lot, coming from you. You are right about the age of those memories.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your poem. Well written. You have penned this poem well. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! I like it. Good luck in the contest! Good job.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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I have enjoyed reading your poem. Well written. You have penned this poem well. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing! I like it. Good luck in the contest! Good job.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Raul. Must have gotten lucky on the grammar.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Cute picture and I like the words you have written for this contest entry. There is always something special about that first kiss, an experience that stays with us.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Cute picture and I like the words you have written for this contest entry. There is always something special about that first kiss, an experience that stays with us.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Anne. My first kiss was a long time ago.
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You are welcome, that's true for me as well.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
First kiss opportunity
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Beautiful poem about the first kiss. I still remember mine. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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First kiss opportunity
First Miss
Beautiful poem about the first kiss. I still remember mine. Your poem flows well. It draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Gypsy. Mine was so long ago, I can't remember it.
Comment from lyenochka
That's so cute - and young teens on their first date have so many other things on their minds so it would be easy to miss that opportunity for the "first kiss." Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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That's so cute - and young teens on their first date have so many other things on their minds so it would be easy to miss that opportunity for the "first kiss." Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Helen. A big kiss for you.
Comment from J. Dennis
Oh my what a lovely prompt.
I see that you followed all of the rules.
You wrote poem that brings back delightful memories. (I don't kiss and tell.)
I enjoy poems that speak to the young as well as the older generation.
Nice job!
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Oh my what a lovely prompt.
I see that you followed all of the rules.
You wrote poem that brings back delightful memories. (I don't kiss and tell.)
I enjoy poems that speak to the young as well as the older generation.
Nice job!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the review and kind words. I don't kiss and tell either. My wife is very shy, and she would be upset if I told about our dalliances.
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Same for my husband.
Agreed.