Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Dr Ricky,
Well... I can tell this has a deep connection and meaning to you.

You may want to check these words and lines in part A (leaving), to see if there is a typo?

I can't see but *since* that my body below.?
Thousand *can* upon thousands of angels.?

Enjoyed your poem Ricky, well done... especially after reading your notes made it clearer to the destiny of your intention. Sorry for your great loss.

With our thoughts we create...

Kind regards,
James.

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

Why thank you very much James the sentence with the word "since" had to be corrected.
Always a pleasure.
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

Ricky, I enjoyed how you creatively expressed the joy and pleasure your son must have experienced as his spirit ascended to be with our Lord Jesus. Birthday anniversaries are indeed difficult when our loved ones have passed.
Take care dear one.
Gale

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021

Well, as I present more and more on various subjects?
"Organ tissue Donations"
Yes, has become a very important one.
Not only do I teach but I reach out and touch.
Doing it publicly.
Especially to young people, each and every day.
Thanks for sharing Gail and I really appreciate your comments.
Doctor Ricky 1024
"Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"