Make your Soul Happy
We need more time - Make the best out of the time you have73 total reviews
Comment from Aussie
I agree with your musings. And mothers, good or bad have a big impression on us as children. Every day is precious. We don't know when our time is up - make the most of it. If we give our time and love to everyone we meet, then we have fulfilled our purpose in life. Jesus said, "love one another as I have love you." K xx
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
I agree with your musings. And mothers, good or bad have a big impression on us as children. Every day is precious. We don't know when our time is up - make the most of it. If we give our time and love to everyone we meet, then we have fulfilled our purpose in life. Jesus said, "love one another as I have love you." K xx
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the six stars and your exceptional review!!! You made my day;-)
God bless you;-)
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Totally agree with you. As we are getting older, we feel the urgency to what we want. For me, it's travel. I will try to go to as many places as we can. A friend talks me into going to Antarctica and we are going there in 2013.
Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
Totally agree with you. As we are getting older, we feel the urgency to what we want. For me, it's travel. I will try to go to as many places as we can. A friend talks me into going to Antarctica and we are going there in 2013.
Well done.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Awesome!
Thank you for your excellent rating and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment from Shelley Dawson
Very positive and uplifting! I enjoyed reading this and can definitely relate on some levels.
"Bad decisions and mistakes galore, cover my existence, but they never touched my soul." I love this. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
Very positive and uplifting! I enjoyed reading this and can definitely relate on some levels.
"Bad decisions and mistakes galore, cover my existence, but they never touched my soul." I love this. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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You are so welcome and thank you for my excellent rating and review! I'm happy you could identify with that! Never let any mistake touch your soul bc your soul is made up of your mind, your will and your emotions! That's the secret to never giving up;-)
Many blessings to you and your family;-)
Comment from irishauthorme
Great verse, good message, and great advice!
A great portion of our lives was spent in just making ends meet, PTA meetings, soccer games, birthday parties and bandaging scrapes and hurt feelings.
When we finally do get time to slow down and look back, it does seem that it all flew by so fast.
Grand and Great-Grands are our reward for those frantic years, and perhaps at last we have learned to cherish every day.
Good work,
irish
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
Great verse, good message, and great advice!
A great portion of our lives was spent in just making ends meet, PTA meetings, soccer games, birthday parties and bandaging scrapes and hurt feelings.
When we finally do get time to slow down and look back, it does seem that it all flew by so fast.
Grand and Great-Grands are our reward for those frantic years, and perhaps at last we have learned to cherish every day.
Good work,
irish
Comment Written 10-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Yes I guess they are but I don't get to see mine ;-(
Thank you for my five star rating and review and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment from lancellot
This is very good. I don't about living to a hundred and three. Maybe a nice eighty for me. I like the unique rhyme scheme you chose for this contest entry. It is nice to see something different. You had a prefect matching presentation also.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
This is very good. I don't about living to a hundred and three. Maybe a nice eighty for me. I like the unique rhyme scheme you chose for this contest entry. It is nice to see something different. You had a prefect matching presentation also.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Wow thank you for all your encouraging compliments, they are coveted!
Thanxxx for my five star rating and review;-)
May God bless you;-)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Commentary and Philosophy Rhyming Poem contest entry in rhymes in a free flow of thoughts speaks what makes your soul happy for as part of your life's plan you wish to make others happy; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more, fast for precious time, dear, wrote114books, ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
This Commentary and Philosophy Rhyming Poem contest entry in rhymes in a free flow of thoughts speaks what makes your soul happy for as part of your life's plan you wish to make others happy; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more, fast for precious time, dear, wrote114books, ALCREATOR
Comment Written 09-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much for your kind and encouraging thoughts and best wishes!
Thank you for my 5 stars and may God bless you;-)
Comment from Patty Palmer
How right you are!! At my age (68), I've done everything for everybody who has ever needed me. Now it's my turn to do what makes my soul happy for a bit. That doesn't mean I don't ever want to be needed again, I just would like to take a break! LOL Writing makes my soul happy. I do make time for writing no matter what is going on. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
How right you are!! At my age (68), I've done everything for everybody who has ever needed me. Now it's my turn to do what makes my soul happy for a bit. That doesn't mean I don't ever want to be needed again, I just would like to take a break! LOL Writing makes my soul happy. I do make time for writing no matter what is going on. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Writing makes my soul happy as well! I'm happy to know you enjoyed my poem;-)
I appreciate your review and five stars;-) May God bless you and your family;-)
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You're welcome!
Patty
Comment from Michael Merrill
I really need to learn how to do this. I'm always so caught up in life and stuff I need to do. I need to take time to make my soul happy. thanks for the inspiration! <3
-T
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
I really need to learn how to do this. I'm always so caught up in life and stuff I need to do. I need to take time to make my soul happy. thanks for the inspiration! <3
-T
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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I'm happy I could inspire you with my poem because we all should be aware that time is indeed short so do it now!
Thank you for my review! May God bless you and your family;-)
Comment from Laurie Holding
I hear ya! This was a lovely way to start my week, a poem about the reality of life's struggles, but also a strong statement about how we can use our resources to lift ourselves up and determine to be our best selves, no matter what has happened in the past. Well done!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
I hear ya! This was a lovely way to start my week, a poem about the reality of life's struggles, but also a strong statement about how we can use our resources to lift ourselves up and determine to be our best selves, no matter what has happened in the past. Well done!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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I'm glad I could inspire you because time should never be taken for granted it's too short so do it now!
Your review is appreciated! Blessings ...
Comment from palmart
Great poem that drive readers into a world of time and how it passes shaping our lives and souls (and well, let`s assume it : our bodies as well). You paint nicely this human invention that God does not know and we suffer: Time. Thanks for sharing your point of view.
(My humble point of view: God in eternity has not invented time, we did).
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
Great poem that drive readers into a world of time and how it passes shaping our lives and souls (and well, let`s assume it : our bodies as well). You paint nicely this human invention that God does not know and we suffer: Time. Thanks for sharing your point of view.
(My humble point of view: God in eternity has not invented time, we did).
Comment Written 08-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your kind words my friend!
I appreciate your review! Blessings ...
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You are really welcome, Dear Melody!