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A shotgun wedding

You, me and baby makes three

7 total reviews 
Comment from HarryT
Excellent
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Nice, quick and makes the point with rhyme too. Like and a great pic selection to go with. Keep up the good work. And happy writing. .................

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
    Thank you so much. Jen.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Ooh, I like this senryu type poem. It rhymes well to portray a theme that is every so present in society today, unfortunately. A great picture to help this piece along. I can see why it is the Winner - CONGRATULATIONS.
~DD

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
    Thanks Diana. Not many shotgun weddings nowadays. It seems anything goes. Have a nice day. Jen.
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Congrats! Well done All the best. The supportive photograph is excellent. You were adherent to the 5-7-5 requirement. And your three lines produced a clear statement with an honorable message. Excellent!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
    Thank you so much for the great review and stars. I really appreciate it. Jen.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2021
    Thank you so much for the great review and stars. I really appreciate it. All the best. Jen.
reply by Cecilia Lynne1 on 09-Nov-2021
Comment from tempeste
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Ciao mystery poet

You now have 6 votes!

Your entry definitely stood out from the rest.

It's creative and I enjoyed the read.

Good artwork choice too.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
    Ciao to you too.
    Thank you so much for the vote and great review.
Comment from Eunice Amero
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It has to be a senryu type. I love the picture. So if you have time write something that menas recently married. Thank you for sharing. I wish you all the best.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Thanks
reply by Eunice Amero on 05-Nov-2021
    Welcome
Comment from T B Botts
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Are there still such things as shotgun weddings? I would imagine it would only occur if the guilty party got cold feet. Not the ideal way to start a marriage, but God knows how many marriages came about because of a little one on the way. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Tom

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Many thanks
Comment from dellsworthpoet
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A ribald answer to the prompt. The flow is good. The poem meets the guidelines. The humor is catchy. The picture adds to the poem. The language is simple, but forceful.

A good read. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Many thanks
reply by dellsworthpoet on 05-Nov-2021
    You are welcome.