Memories of This World
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Intersections of place and time
Memories of this world ch. 17
estory
Smiles as I was reading your excellent story brought back a memory of the sound of trains when they were clickey, clack along on the railroad tracks; the with it's horn sounding. Then a fading a lonely feeling.
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Intersections of place and time
Memories of this world ch. 17
estory
Smiles as I was reading your excellent story brought back a memory of the sound of trains when they were clickey, clack along on the railroad tracks; the with it's horn sounding. Then a fading a lonely feeling.
Gert
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review and your perspective on the story. The sound of trains and the sight of people at the windows of their apartments has always made me think of the lives of the people I will never meet in those places, and how we share the same time and moment sometimes. estory
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estory
You are most welcome
Gert
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estory you are welcome
Gert
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do understand. At night as I lie in bed I enjoy listening to the whistle if a distant train. It's as if all is right withe the world. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading. This is well written.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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I do understand. At night as I lie in bed I enjoy listening to the whistle if a distant train. It's as if all is right withe the world. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading. This is well written.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review and I am glad you heard that train whistle like I did. estory
Comment from Bill Schott
This diary entry, Chapter 17, captures the world coming together in sight and sound into one shared cell of reality which everyone takes a piece. Nice.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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This diary entry, Chapter 17, captures the world coming together in sight and sound into one shared cell of reality which everyone takes a piece. Nice.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review and you got exactly what I was trying to get across in this little piece. estory
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Letters and Diary Non-Fiction r Essay, Chapter 17, speaks quoting examples about shared moments, memories of this world, intersections of place and time and strangers, well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more, fast for precious time, dear, Worship Month November. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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This Letters and Diary Non-Fiction r Essay, Chapter 17, speaks quoting examples about shared moments, memories of this world, intersections of place and time and strangers, well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more, fast for precious time, dear, Worship Month November. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review and your continued support for my work. estory
Comment from Judy Lawless
No one can ever say you don't think of others. These observations make it quite apparent that you often think about the people you share life with, even ones you don't know and you have a fleeting connection with them, such as those who pass by on a train. Well written.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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No one can ever say you don't think of others. These observations make it quite apparent that you often think about the people you share life with, even ones you don't know and you have a fleeting connection with them, such as those who pass by on a train. Well written.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review and your wonderful comments supporting this little piece estory
Comment from BethShelby
Interesting bit of thinking. I think about these things too. Everyone has unique lives with their own story which we won't ever know. They are ships that pass in the night as the old adage goes. There is so much to know about the people around us, but we're not likely to find out.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Interesting bit of thinking. I think about these things too. Everyone has unique lives with their own story which we won't ever know. They are ships that pass in the night as the old adage goes. There is so much to know about the people around us, but we're not likely to find out.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review and your wonderful words of support for the story, I think you got exactly what I was trying to get across here. estory
