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Unexpected Windfall

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is so funny and I laughed so hard my husband was willing to listen to the story. He got a kick out of it also. I don't know if Scott is real but he's a great vehicle for your delightful stories. If Reader's Digest is still being published, have you ever considered submitting this to Life in These United States or even some other publication?

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
    Thanks! I've been posting to online publications via medium.com.

    Jim's official diagnosis is DSD--Dick-Spectrum Disorder.

    The notes were short and to the point: Thanks for Thanksgiving; mark me down to Christmas.

    As to the amount of the donation, I made up the number.
Comment from Begin Again
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I didn't care for ole Jim throughout the story, but learning his family is happy to pay for his absence is unbelievable. Awesome on the donation though.

Hugs, Carol

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
    Jim's official diagnosis is DSD--Dick-Spectrum Disorder.

    The notes were short and to the point: Thanks for Thanksgiving; mark me down to Christmas.

    As to the amount of the donation, I made up the number.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Excellent story my friend! I adore the way the characters interact together! The storyline is captivating and this is very well thought out and written;-)

Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
    Jim's official diagnosis is DSD--Dick-Spectrum Disorder.

    The notes were short and to the point: Thanks for Thanksgiving; mark me down for Christmas.

    As to the amount of the donation, I made up the number.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 10-Nov-2021
    ???
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
    I was just making a snarky joke about my invented psychiatric diagnosis of the obnoxious guy, and how his thank you note was mainly to reserve a slot for XMAS dinner. The gist of this story is true--I exaggerated the donation amount.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is an excellent post, even for you. I don't know who I felt sorriest for, the rabbi or the would-be dessert eaters. Just happy that justice won out in the end!

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 08-Nov-2021
    Thanks for that!

    Jim's official diagnosis is DSD--Dick-Spectrum Disorder.

    The notes were short and to the point: Thanks for Thanksgiving; mark me down for Christmas.

    As to the amount of the donation, I made up the number.
Comment from Jeff Watkins
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Elizabeth, you darned well should be recognized for this gem. Jack wrote the notes, don't you think? Also, I wonder if Jim has a touch of autism. The post draws in the reader and never lets go. Jeff

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Lovely ssssssurprise, Jeff!

    Jim's official diagnosis is DSD--Dick-Spectrum Disorder.

    The notes were short and to the point: Thanks for Thanksgiving; mark me down to Christmas.
reply by Jeff Watkins on 05-Nov-2021
    I didn't understand your not to Tom. Hoewever, emilee wrote a decent comment for me. Jeff
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Really !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
reply by Jeff Watkins on 06-Nov-2021
    I have a lot of exclamation marks on my review, also. I didn't realize their purpose. She gave me three stars, and that rating not consistent with he exclamation marks.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
    That's my point--she's using filler!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!--besides which, she duplicates the text!
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Lol. A thanksgiving war story, he received battle pay!!!!!!!! Another nice twist at the end and a well-presented slice of life. You're like the Norman Rockwell of Story Land.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Jim's official diagnosis is DSD--Dick-Spectrum Disorder.

    The notes were short and to the point: Thanks for Thanksgiving; mark me down to Christmas.
Comment from Sanku
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It is a well deserved cheque not for taking the miserable man off his family but for the great service he was doing to lonely people.
Hope he will be rewarded more...God.Bless him

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Jim's official diagnosis is DSD--Dick-Spectrum Disorder.

    The notes were short and to the point: Thanks for Thanksgiving; mark me down to Christmas.

    As to the amount of the donation, I made up the number.
Comment from Kooky Clown
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I just loved this especially the last chapter which was just great. I think Scott deserved every cent for what he had put up with over the years. A very well written story which I say I really enjoyed thanks for sharing. Kooky.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Jim's official diagnosis is DSD--Dick-Spectrum Disorder.

    The notes were short and to the point: Thanks for Thanksgiving; mark me down to Christmas.

    As to the amount of the donation, I made up the number.

    Thanks for stopping by--always nice to see you!
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
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Oh yeah, oh yeah! Hysterical and very well written. Great weirdness factor in the Jim character with his thank you notes. I would like more of an explanation as to why Jim's brother shows up out of the blue. Did Jim finally kick the mashed potato bucket. Is he dead, incapacitated or just vanish. Just a thought.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Thankssssss!


    Jim's official diagnosis is DSD--Dick-Spectrum Disorder.

    The notes were short and to the point: Thanks for Thanksgiving; mark me down to Christmas. He's still alive, alas.

    As to the amount of the donation, I made up the number.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Liz.

This is a pretty funny story. There have been times over the years I was in a similar situation. I'm just sorry I didn't think of that very effective program. The people I always wished not to see, never failed to show up.

However, being cheap, I would never have thought of paying a bounty to keep them away.

Robert

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2021
    Jim's official diagnosis is DSD--Dick-Spectrum Disorder.

    The notes were short and to the point: Thanks for Thanksgiving; mark me down to Christmas.

    As to the amount of the donation, I made up the number.