Cat Laugh !
Farmhouse /story27 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a cute story and I'm sure a child would enjoy hearing it, too. Tommy sounds like a sweet little guy, too young for a cat, I guess. He's lucky he didn't get a scratch. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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This is a cute story and I'm sure a child would enjoy hearing it, too. Tommy sounds like a sweet little guy, too young for a cat, I guess. He's lucky he didn't get a scratch. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Great review zanya
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Glad you liked it.
Comment from royowen
One has to get up early in the morning to outdo a cat, they are extremely resourceful animals, but this would have been a lesson to Tommie, despite your wisdom to oversdow, beautifully written my friend, good luck. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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One has to get up early in the morning to outdo a cat, they are extremely resourceful animals, but this would have been a lesson to Tommie, despite your wisdom to oversdow, beautifully written my friend, good luck. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Glad you enjoyed reading this little tale zanya
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Well done
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, perfect ending, Zanya. I enjoyed your contest entry. Your words were well chosen, filled with good action and dialogue, and fun to read. I could see this little story a I read--good use of descriptive words/phrases.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Haha, perfect ending, Zanya. I enjoyed your contest entry. Your words were well chosen, filled with good action and dialogue, and fun to read. I could see this little story a I read--good use of descriptive words/phrases.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from BethShelby
THis is a cute story. THe cat had the best spot to ride out the storm. Tommie pulling the cats tail reminds me of a cat I had when I was about five. Mom told me to stop pulling the cat's tail. I said I'm not pulling her tail. I'm just holding on. She's doing all the pulling.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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THis is a cute story. THe cat had the best spot to ride out the storm. Tommie pulling the cats tail reminds me of a cat I had when I was about five. Mom told me to stop pulling the cat's tail. I said I'm not pulling her tail. I'm just holding on. She's doing all the pulling.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Love this humorous touch to this review zanya
Comment from LisaMay
I laughed out loud at this story. I bet Ginger slammed that door on purpose just to get away from that tail-pulling Tommie. You've set the scene well and the characters come alive in the story.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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I laughed out loud at this story. I bet Ginger slammed that door on purpose just to get away from that tail-pulling Tommie. You've set the scene well and the characters come alive in the story.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from Berenice
The last line had me chuckling. I wasn't quite sure how the brief of the contest would be met by this piece, but it did, successfully! It came as a surprise that poor Ginger had the last laugh after all. Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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The last line had me chuckling. I wasn't quite sure how the brief of the contest would be met by this piece, but it did, successfully! It came as a surprise that poor Ginger had the last laugh after all. Well done!
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from lyenochka
It's good that Ginger got the last laugh and hopefully, Tommie learned a thing or two about how to interact with cats. Cute story! Best wishes in the contest!
Suggestions of punctuation and spelling:
No he's not granpa, ' (No, he's not, Grandpa,)
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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It's good that Ginger got the last laugh and hopefully, Tommie learned a thing or two about how to interact with cats. Cute story! Best wishes in the contest!
Suggestions of punctuation and spelling:
No he's not granpa, ' (No, he's not, Grandpa,)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Great review zanya
