Cat Laugh !
Farmhouse /story27 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Warren
I bet Ginger is laughing. He's comfortably inside while the human who pulled his tail and the one who let it happen hide in the bushes. My cats are terrified of storms. They hide under the covers in my bed as soon as the thunder starts. I guess Ginger is a lot braver than they are.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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I bet Ginger is laughing. He's comfortably inside while the human who pulled his tail and the one who let it happen hide in the bushes. My cats are terrified of storms. They hide under the covers in my bed as soon as the thunder starts. I guess Ginger is a lot braver than they are.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
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Great review zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here as this cat had the last laugh here and cats can hide in strange places and still get a good view. A fine and entertaining write Zanya, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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You made me smile here as this cat had the last laugh here and cats can hide in strange places and still get a good view. A fine and entertaining write Zanya, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
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Great review - yes cat are smart! zanya
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a very good entry for the contest. Good luck. I took care of cats for over 40 years and I can certainly relate to Ginger!. Since we did not have children, only cats, our cats were uneasy around youngsters. This is posted as fiction, but sure sounds like a few elements of truth. Good Job.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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This is a very good entry for the contest. Good luck. I took care of cats for over 40 years and I can certainly relate to Ginger!. Since we did not have children, only cats, our cats were uneasy around youngsters. This is posted as fiction, but sure sounds like a few elements of truth. Good Job.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from prettybluebirds
I love this short story. Of course, I would being as how I am a confirmed cat lady. I can see where a cat might do something like that. I don't blame her either as the kid pulled her tail. Nothing a cat hates worse. LOL This is truly a cute story and should do well in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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I love this short story. Of course, I would being as how I am a confirmed cat lady. I can see where a cat might do something like that. I don't blame her either as the kid pulled her tail. Nothing a cat hates worse. LOL This is truly a cute story and should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from nomi338
You see, that is why I do not trust cats to this very day. For most of my life I have had a rather rocky relationship with cats. during an early part of my life, circumstances forced me to live with my grandmother and her house full of cats. Those cats made my life miserable, and to make matters worse, my grandmother always sided with the cats against me. New circumstances some 70 years later, my great grand daughter and her family are living temporarily with me and guess what, the one cat she talked me into allowing her to add to the household has magically turned into the mom and four kittens. I tell you, I do not trust cats.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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You see, that is why I do not trust cats to this very day. For most of my life I have had a rather rocky relationship with cats. during an early part of my life, circumstances forced me to live with my grandmother and her house full of cats. Those cats made my life miserable, and to make matters worse, my grandmother always sided with the cats against me. New circumstances some 70 years later, my great grand daughter and her family are living temporarily with me and guess what, the one cat she talked me into allowing her to add to the household has magically turned into the mom and four kittens. I tell you, I do not trust cats.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Kooky Clown
I enjoyed this and it did make me smile, when they turned to head back indoors I thought it was going to be a case that grandpa had locked them selves out so the fact that Ginger was inside grinning at them was a great finale. Kooky.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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I enjoyed this and it did make me smile, when they turned to head back indoors I thought it was going to be a case that grandpa had locked them selves out so the fact that Ginger was inside grinning at them was a great finale. Kooky.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
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Thanks for reading and a great review zanya
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Good luck on the writing prompt contest my friend with this excellent story! You need to make sure your words are aligned properly in some of your paragraphs!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Good luck on the writing prompt contest my friend with this excellent story! You need to make sure your words are aligned properly in some of your paragraphs!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2021
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Thanks for sharing -great review & paragraph advice-much appreciated zanya
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You have a good story here with a neat twist at the end. You do, however, need to change your paragraphing. When one person is speaking or doing something, that makes a paragraph. Also, the boy is outside so don't have the rain coming down heavily. "Not being . . . By now . . . He froze . . ." and "With Tommie . . ." all belong in same paragraph. Divide "Ginger . . . Ginger's run . . . " and "No, he's not . . ." into 3 paragraphs. Best of luck with this story.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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You have a good story here with a neat twist at the end. You do, however, need to change your paragraphing. When one person is speaking or doing something, that makes a paragraph. Also, the boy is outside so don't have the rain coming down heavily. "Not being . . . By now . . . He froze . . ." and "With Tommie . . ." all belong in same paragraph. Divide "Ginger . . . Ginger's run . . . " and "No, he's not . . ." into 3 paragraphs. Best of luck with this story.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2021
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Thanks for taking time to add info re paragraphs - much appreciated.
Great review zanya
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a humorous story in that the cat has the last (and only) laugh. He's inside looking out at the two humans who have to wait out the storm under a tree. I'm assuming the back door is locked and Grandpa doesn't have a key to get back in. I hope when the storm is over he can find a key to the front door. Otherwise, he'll be outside a long time. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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This is a humorous story in that the cat has the last (and only) laugh. He's inside looking out at the two humans who have to wait out the storm under a tree. I'm assuming the back door is locked and Grandpa doesn't have a key to get back in. I hope when the storm is over he can find a key to the front door. Otherwise, he'll be outside a long time. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2021
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Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Great story...loved this. You have made Grandpa so real, I swear I could smell my Grandpa's 'backy. Oh, what a memory - thank you. This story is told just as should be...with nostalgia and plain language. I could see Kitty sitting in that window! Best of luck in the contest. A lovely write.
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021
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Great story...loved this. You have made Grandpa so real, I swear I could smell my Grandpa's 'backy. Oh, what a memory - thank you. This story is told just as should be...with nostalgia and plain language. I could see Kitty sitting in that window! Best of luck in the contest. A lovely write.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2021
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Great review - plain language is best isn't it really ? zanya
