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Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Whew...thought Bob was a goner. I love this type of surprise in a poem or write. You think one thing and then - boom, it all comes out as good. You have done a great job and I wish you luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
Whew...thought Bob was a goner. I love this type of surprise in a poem or write. You think one thing and then - boom, it all comes out as good. You have done a great job and I wish you luck in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you! The story has won second place! I'm proud of myself!
Comment from Aspiring2Write
This is a great fictional story Raul. Just to let you know. Bob said he did something wrong even though he didn't do anything. Other than that it flows really well, and you should be proud of it. Wish you the best in your future writing.
Yours Truly,
Joshua Law
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
This is a great fictional story Raul. Just to let you know. Bob said he did something wrong even though he didn't do anything. Other than that it flows really well, and you should be proud of it. Wish you the best in your future writing.
Yours Truly,
Joshua Law
Comment Written 11-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2021
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Thank you! I am proud of it and thanks again! :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Annette R.
The citizens were (not wer) safe, just a typo. Not sure why there is a warning for language but if it's for damn I have seen d@mn. I like the picture as it fits the story well. It's so human to think we are in trouble. Like the happy ending.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
The citizens were (not wer) safe, just a typo. Not sure why there is a warning for language but if it's for damn I have seen d@mn. I like the picture as it fits the story well. It's so human to think we are in trouble. Like the happy ending.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
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Thank you and for your help! Is it now good enough for five stars? Please, check it.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Uplifting story! By coincidence, my friend has just been promoted to lieutenant.
typos:
I will make it up to you. I pormise=>promise," Bob replied COMMA concerned.
sargeant=>sergeant
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
Uplifting story! By coincidence, my friend has just been promoted to lieutenant.
typos:
I will make it up to you. I pormise=>promise," Bob replied COMMA concerned.
sargeant=>sergeant
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from tfawcus
His boss certainly has a warped sense of humour. Judging from Bob's reaction, I wondered if he really had done something wrong but covered it up successfully.
I enjoyed reading your response to this challenge.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
His boss certainly has a warped sense of humour. Judging from Bob's reaction, I wondered if he really had done something wrong but covered it up successfully.
I enjoyed reading your response to this challenge.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thank you!