Peace and Serenity
Nature's Beauties45 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You painted an ambient scene here in your fine and perfectly formed nonet, nature at its best and the blue skies makes it all worth while for this little birds, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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You painted an ambient scene here in your fine and perfectly formed nonet, nature at its best and the blue skies makes it all worth while for this little birds, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from T B Botts
Well done on your nonet poem entry. I've never attempted one before. I'm not much into writing poetry, although once in awhile I'll think of something humorous that I think would work in a poem and give that a try. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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Well done on your nonet poem entry. I've never attempted one before. I'm not much into writing poetry, although once in awhile I'll think of something humorous that I think would work in a poem and give that a try. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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Thanks. You have a blessed evening too.
Comment from Annette R.
Loved the picture. Perfect for the poem. Your ability to write a poem with these restrictions is impressive. I am not a poet and doubt I could write with these restrictions. I read it because of the positive title.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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Loved the picture. Perfect for the poem. Your ability to write a poem with these restrictions is impressive. I am not a poet and doubt I could write with these restrictions. I read it because of the positive title.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Nonet Poem Contest writing prompt entry speaks on peace and serenity, speaks about Nature's beauties as you find, enjoy, hear song - all in Nature; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more, fast, time precious dear, November Winter. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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This Nonet Poem Contest writing prompt entry speaks on peace and serenity, speaks about Nature's beauties as you find, enjoy, hear song - all in Nature; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless You, my good writer, post more, fast, time precious dear, November Winter. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from Word Junkie
Hello Author,
This is a lovely poem and your well-chosen words make an indelible imprint in the reader's mind. I'd like it if you'd get rid of 'some' in that first line and use a word such as 'cool' because 'some' is vague. I'll also suggest that you drop that comma at the end of the second line.
This is a great contest entry. I hope you win!
Cheers,
~Lana
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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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Hello Author,
This is a lovely poem and your well-chosen words make an indelible imprint in the reader's mind. I'd like it if you'd get rid of 'some' in that first line and use a word such as 'cool' because 'some' is vague. I'll also suggest that you drop that comma at the end of the second line.
This is a great contest entry. I hope you win!
Cheers,
~Lana
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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Thanks for your help!
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It looks great. 'Around' in the first line - typo. Have an excellent day!
