Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Exceptional

This is a beautifully written nonet poem. Nice presentation. Very beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest. Well done.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Thanks. The contest is over.

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

You have done a fantastic job describing this peaceful moment in nature. I could see it all in my minds eye and it made me feel happy. Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Thanks. The contest is over.

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

I wanted to comment here. Beautifully written.
Good poetic aura, and the imagery is both giving and poignant.
A very well done for the form.
Wishing you well with it.
My best.
RGstar

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Thanks.

Comment from Jasminium

Excellent

I love nature poems as this one is truly one of my favourites now.. captures the pain of our Mother Earth.. good luck and keep writing ..!!would love to read more of your work..

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Please read my poems that are in contests.

reply by Jasminium on 14-Nov-2021

Surely will do..!!

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Fine work in the nonet form! Lovely flow, strong imagery, graceful presentation. Vividly evocative of peace and serentiy in a nature walk, as per the apt title.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021

Thanks.

Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

I loved this nonet Pookie. Thank you for reminding me of the joys of walking through God's beautiful creation and enjoying the sights and sounds of nature. This is a wonderful little poem. I wish you much luck in the contest. Hugs, MM

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021

The contest is over, but I hope you can read my new poems. Take care, thanks for being my friend.

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Your words create a feel for nature. The reader feels like she is out in the natural world. Excellent nonet form that brings the good feelings of birds singing and the cloudless sky to life.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021

Thanks very much.

Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko

Excellent

The objective correlative of the work reminisces a specification compliant Nonet poem; with its nine lines garbed consistently with nine syllables at the top that tappers into one on the last line.

The work highlights an all encompassing milieu of peace and serenity that overtly impacts on the constituent environment traversed by the tourist in the poem.

The work earns its texture through the effective use of metaphors, alliterations and personifications.

Excellent work. Bravo.

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021

Thank you.

reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 13-Nov-2021

Remain Blessed.

Comment from Amelie P.

Good

Reading this makes me want to go outside and be in nature! It has a very tranquil tone - a calming effect on the reader. Thanks for sharing! It flows very nicely as well

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 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021

Why is only a good poem?

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

So that's what a nonet is. I was rather proud of figuring it out, only to find you explain it in the author note. By figuring it out, though, I validated the syllabic mathematics of your poem. Content-wise, I discovered how masterfully you wrote it as well. Good luck, Pookie (a delightful name)!

 Comment Written 13-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021

Thanks.

reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021

I didn't explain it though

reply by Jay Squires on 13-Nov-2021

I see what I did. FS must have given the ingredients for the nonet. Sorry about that.

reply by the author on 13-Nov-2021

That is ok