Last Summer Rose
Mother Nature awakens roses each spring.4 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
What a beautifully written nonet; your syllable count is perfection. The overall presentation appeals to the eyes. What impressed me the most was the imagery you created. I also enjoyed your carefully thought out choice of wording and thought they were powerful yet subtle.
Such beauty in this one.
Gale
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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What a beautifully written nonet; your syllable count is perfection. The overall presentation appeals to the eyes. What impressed me the most was the imagery you created. I also enjoyed your carefully thought out choice of wording and thought they were powerful yet subtle.
Such beauty in this one.
Gale
Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review and comments.
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This was a work of art, and I loved it so much!
Comment from karenina
This is exquisitely composed. The tone comes through even in the economy of words... your Nonet count is spot on... Center alignment works so very well for this subject matter. Your theme is timely, as Fall begins to turn ever so slowly to the beginning monologue of winter.
Absolutely has my vote!
Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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This is exquisitely composed. The tone comes through even in the economy of words... your Nonet count is spot on... Center alignment works so very well for this subject matter. Your theme is timely, as Fall begins to turn ever so slowly to the beginning monologue of winter.
Absolutely has my vote!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your read and most encouraging review.
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If you don't win, I want a recount!
(wink)
K
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Thank you for your positive thought.
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My pleasure.
K
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love this composition it's so delicate and the embroidery of life comes from every angle: "the last lonely summer rose sheds her
red petals waiting patiently
for a snowy white blanket
to snug her down for a
restful winter sleep
until March sun
awakens
her young
bud." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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I love this composition it's so delicate and the embroidery of life comes from every angle: "the last lonely summer rose sheds her
red petals waiting patiently
for a snowy white blanket
to snug her down for a
restful winter sleep
until March sun
awakens
her young
bud." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the read and encouraging feedback.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a delightful nonet about roses - but it's deeper than that. It feels more like a subtle message for the readers, as well. We all go through those cold times that shred us and knock us down. But that only means that warmer, brighter, better days are coming. We will rebloom - like new roses!
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a delightful nonet about roses - but it's deeper than that. It feels more like a subtle message for the readers, as well. We all go through those cold times that shred us and knock us down. But that only means that warmer, brighter, better days are coming. We will rebloom - like new roses!
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
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I love your optimism, Robyn. Thanks for the read and insightful feedback.
