Apocalypse
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Apocalypse pt. 15"A poetic expression of the end times
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Comment from Paul McFarland
This poem shows what might happen when Christ comes again. If he waits too long, I'm afraid there might not be anything left. Maybe He will start again with a clean slate.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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This poem shows what might happen when Christ comes again. If he waits too long, I'm afraid there might not be anything left. Maybe He will start again with a clean slate.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the excellent review and the perspective on the piece. Its always interesting to hear what the readers think of what's laid out in front of them. Often it is something I never thought of. estory
Comment from BethShelby
It sounds like you've taken some images from the Bible which describes something of this nature as being part of the second coming. In Matt. where like lightening coming from the east to the west and Rev. where the sky spits and rolls up like a scroll. I would imagine your description of man made things ceasing to work would be accurate. Nicely written. Should be thought provoking.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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It sounds like you've taken some images from the Bible which describes something of this nature as being part of the second coming. In Matt. where like lightening coming from the east to the west and Rev. where the sky spits and rolls up like a scroll. I would imagine your description of man made things ceasing to work would be accurate. Nicely written. Should be thought provoking.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thanks for the encouraging words of support and you are spot on with your analysis. You got what I was trying to get across here. estory
Comment from Terry Broxson
I think you accomplished the objectives you set for yourself. The cool thing for me is that you did it with few words, not over dramatized. The only suggestion and it is minor...maybe electricity instead of electric...your call. Good Job.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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I think you accomplished the objectives you set for yourself. The cool thing for me is that you did it with few words, not over dramatized. The only suggestion and it is minor...maybe electricity instead of electric...your call. Good Job.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much for the words of support for my little apocalypse piece. estory
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter of the Commentary and Philosophy Poetry, apocalypse pt. 15, speaks about the moment of the second coming of Jesus Christ, in the age of Christ, He spoke I am the end, and the beginning; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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This Chapter of the Commentary and Philosophy Poetry, apocalypse pt. 15, speaks about the moment of the second coming of Jesus Christ, in the age of Christ, He spoke I am the end, and the beginning; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much for the continued support of all my work. estory
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I would say your poem met your goal. I read the poem before I read your author's notes and had the impression you wanted. I could also feel the emotion. Your poem flowed smoothly.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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I would say your poem met your goal. I read the poem before I read your author's notes and had the impression you wanted. I could also feel the emotion. Your poem flowed smoothly.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much for the excellent review and your support for the piece. estory
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I'm not a Christian but I can see the image you have portraited here. Yes. This is what means to be ascending to heaven and you did a great job doing it.
Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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I'm not a Christian but I can see the image you have portraited here. Yes. This is what means to be ascending to heaven and you did a great job doing it.
Well done.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
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Thanks so much for the excellent review and all your continued support for my work. esotry
