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Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Let All You Do Be Done in Love"
My sad Heart emoting @utilizing it's 'Heart-Brain'
3 total reviews
Comment from
Lulube
Yes, you are surrounded by doom and gloom, but for the cherished, sweet memories, everything is preserved in bloom.
lulube
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
When I go back to that period of time?
Yes, which I do visit at least a hundred times a year.
I write about it and as I journal it.
I also dedicate it.
Because as a parent.
Yes, that's what I had promised to do.
To do for my only son Jason. On April fools Day 2003.
As he forever would be taken away.
To be dispersed and exist now in others.
That Sad but momentous day.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Lulube on 03-Nov-2021
Comment from
Melodie Michelle
Really excellent job thank you so much for sharing this piece with us;-)
The storyline is quite interesting and I was in the edge of my seat waiting to see what's going to happen!
God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
Why thank you so much for your excellent review and your wonderful comments!
Doctor Ricky
reply by Melodie Michelle on 02-Nov-2021
Comment from
Jasmine Girl
I'm sure exactly what's this about. I have stayed at La Quinta Inn before and it's not bad. This is a poetry but why are you using a book format?
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
I add things into books very seldom do I just stand them alone cuz I written almost 850.
Thanks for sharing Lisa and see you at La Quinta next year!
Rick
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