Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Hi June!

We are all glad for that new season! Of course, I favor this style of poetry and the way you display the same.

Best wishes for contest entry.

Mark

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021

Thanks, Mark! Glad you enjoyed this piece.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Perfectly said. Crocuses are the best messengers of "hope resurrected" as they can push through snow. Great flow between your opening lines and a strong satori finish! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021

Thank you for reading and sharing your insightful feedback! Much appreciated.

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

Hello June,
I love crocus'. They are indeed a breath of fresh air after a long winter. They are like a reward for making it through another winter with a promise of the spring to come. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021

Thank you for reading and sharing your insightful feedback! Much appreciated.

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

Hello June,
I love crocus'. They are indeed a breath of fresh air after a long winter. They are like a reward for making it through another winter with a promise of the spring to come. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021