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Letter to God

A letter to God.

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Comment from Justin Chopin
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A very compassionate piece. I'm glad that you were able to articulate your concerns to God about Covid with this wonderful letter. I thought the care you displayed with the anti vaxers was very sweet and shows you generally want everyone to be healthy during these hard pandemic times. Great work.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you!
reply by Justin Chopin on 01-Nov-2021
    You're welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine letter to God to help us in troubled times and Covid has turned our world upside down and caused many of us to die and changed our behaviours too, perhaps this has done us good in the long term, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
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That is a letter from the heart, and you have expressed what many are doubtless thinking and wondering. God will answer His people when they turn to Him with their whole heart in genuine repentance, and this letter may challenge many to do just that. Good wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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I enjoyed this entry for the - Dear God - contest.
It allows the reader to feel the desperation and desire
for peace and love in this world gone haywire.

Just a couple of edits shown in ( ).

- Since(remove comma) COVID arrived,

- These are caring(,) kind humans

Thank you for sharing this thoughtful piece and good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
    Thank you and thanks for your help!
reply by PoemsOfDD on 29-Oct-2021
    Pleasure :-) ~DD
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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AMEN! I cannot disagree with anything you write to God about. We seem to have lost our way in working and caring for each other. Fear and hate has us in its grip.
Well said.
Regards
Mary

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Heartfelt plea--you chose an apt topic--kudos for presenting the ills of this terrible time without spewing hate. You compassion is laudable.

Let us see the light [under=>AT THE END OF] the tunnel.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
    Thank you and for your help! I have fixed the mistake.
Comment from Modee
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If everyone got up in the morning and said this prayer, what a wonderful world it would be. There needs to be much more talking with God in the daily lives of everyone. Nice.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This Letters and Diary Fiction, Dear God, writing prompt entry, speaks about a letter to God, present state of living across the world, after COVID, let the children know what love is right now; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
    Thank you!