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Lovers : Tauriel and Kili

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Comment from Michele Harber
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I admire how you managed to use this restrictive syllable count to tell a full story, and that you even managed to throw in a couple of rhymes and near rhymes. Well done, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
    Thankyou for the kind review .. I did try to fit in a couple of ( near) rhymes.

    I hope you enjoyed the trailers below .

    since I?m new to the Hobbit trilogy I?m super hyped about this saga.

reply by Michele Harber on 30-Oct-2021
    You're very welcome.

    I did enjoy the trailers, and I'm glad you included them. I read the books, and saw the movies, so long ago that I actually didn't remember that storyline.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Love the hobbit trilogy. Excellent entry for the Etheree Poem writing prompt contest. It's an interesting poetic form, I may try it. Good syllables count and connection between lines, as far as I can tell. Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
    I?m new to the Hobbit Trilogy and I have a crush on Thranduil. ( blush)

    I have been reading several fanfic stories about how he lost his wife .

    Now I know why those gems meant so much to him .. they were a gift to his wife and later stolen.

    Tauriel and Kili are favourites of mine too .. I cried so much when Kili died.

    Thank you for the positive feedback .. you should definitely try this format , I?m sure you will excel.