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Less Than Perfect

a 2-4-2 poem contest entry

7 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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With a certain unique point of view, one could find beauty in anything. This looks like melted and reformed ice and it probably sparkles in the sun beautifully.
Congrats on placing third in the contest, June.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2022

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2022
    Thank you! As they say, beauty is in the eye of the beholder?
reply by dragonpoet on 14-Feb-2022
    My pleasure, June.
    Joan
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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As they say, beauty is in the eyes of the beholder and you've said that very creatively in your black and white presentation June. I did enjoy your
2-4-2 poem. Goodluck in the contest.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
    Imperfections and flaws can be overlooked as beauty is truly in the eye of the beholder - or should we say in the heart of the beholder. Thank you for stopping by to share your sentiments.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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I think that this is how you do the 2-4-2 poems. There is a lot of meaning in your 8 syllables. Your presentation is lovely as well. Is that a snowflake? The whole post is intriguing.
Nice job.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
    Imperfections and flaws can be overlooked as beauty is truly in the eye of the beholder - or should we say in the heart of the beholder. Thank you for stopping by to share your sentiments.
Comment from country ranch writer
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Nice set up for this shirt shirt. Beauty is in the eye if the builder, as you know imperfections and flaws can be overlooked by those who appreciate intersections..

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
    Imperfections and flaws can be overlooked as beauty is truly in the eye of the beholder - or should we say in the heart of the beholder. Thank you for stopping by to share your sentiments.
reply by country ranch writer on 27-Oct-2021
    👹🎃💀🦉👀🐕🐾🐾
Comment from CL Huth
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I don't think you need the tilde, because your choice of words -- three perfect words -- speak the deep truth of your message. Well done. This made me smile. Thank you. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
    Thank you! I appreciate your insights and feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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There is great beauty in imperfection June and you discovered it here, I enjoyed your ambient words, there is so much beauty in this world that is overlooked, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
    Some of the most beautiful people in the world have distinctive features that are not quite perfect. And nature offers some unique forms of beauty - we just need look with eyes of wonder and appreciation.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

June,

Do like your contrast between imperfection (imperfections?) and beauty in such a short poem! Coloring and artwork just add to your overall presentation. I too have used your FanArtist for some of my posts.

Best wishes in the voting.

Mark

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2021

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
    I think I will revise it to imperfections. Thanks for the feedback and stars!