Japanese Poetry 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Contemplation"Japanese poetry club submissions
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I often see my Mother's face in the mirror when I look at myself, I see her in my own face, a poignant write Debra, I can identify with these words, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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I often see my Mother's face in the mirror when I look at myself, I see her in my own face, a poignant write Debra, I can identify with these words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Dolly :) I appreciate your feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from lyenochka
What a great way to say it! Yes, sometimes we see our parents' features when we look at ourselves as we age. And maybe it's not the precise way they looked but something about the way they looked that gets mirrored back in generations.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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What a great way to say it! Yes, sometimes we see our parents' features when we look at ourselves as we age. And maybe it's not the precise way they looked but something about the way they looked that gets mirrored back in generations.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Helen :) I appreciate your lovely feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Sherry Asbury
I can see I will have some stiff competition from you in the Asian club - but I could not be more pleased. You are lovely and talented. I love this picture, and it says so much!!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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I can see I will have some stiff competition from you in the Asian club - but I could not be more pleased. You are lovely and talented. I love this picture, and it says so much!!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Sherry :) I appreciate your lovely feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Elegant and pensive. You nailed the title--spot-on for the theme. Nice to see you around Debra--it's been months! What are the rules for this type of Japanese poetry?
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Elegant and pensive. You nailed the title--spot-on for the theme. Nice to see you around Debra--it's been months! What are the rules for this type of Japanese poetry?
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Liz :) I appreciate your lovely feedback. Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from Terry Broxson
That is very creative. It has wonderful imagery, and the picture you choose goes very well with what you wrote. Being a man I am not sure, but I do believe what you said is true. Well done.
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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That is very creative. It has wonderful imagery, and the picture you choose goes very well with what you wrote. Being a man I am not sure, but I do believe what you said is true. Well done.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Terry :) I appreciate your feedback. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from zanya
A perennial life moment is exquisitely captured and portrayed here in this 12/5 poem - a moment, perhaps that we all experience at some point - lovely visual
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A perennial life moment is exquisitely captured and portrayed here in this 12/5 poem - a moment, perhaps that we all experience at some point - lovely visual
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much, Zanya :) I appreciate your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra
