Brian's book of poem's
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Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
Did the voices teach you something or were they just a nuisance, or imagination?
It's rather difficult to know whether one should offer you congratulations or commiserations - but it was a poem about dreams so maybe you weren't quite awake after all.
Good internal rhyme - not much else to say about a one lined poem.
Warmly,
Juliette
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Did the voices teach you something or were they just a nuisance, or imagination?
It's rather difficult to know whether one should offer you congratulations or commiserations - but it was a poem about dreams so maybe you weren't quite awake after all.
Good internal rhyme - not much else to say about a one lined poem.
Warmly,
Juliette
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
Comment from Mama Baer
Well, this creates a lot of imagery for me! With just a few short words, it made me think about waking up each day and all the "voices" I heard the night before. Very good short poem!
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Well, this creates a lot of imagery for me! With just a few short words, it made me think about waking up each day and all the "voices" I heard the night before. Very good short poem!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
