Adrift
Ekphrastic Prose14 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your story reads well, Debra. The length is good for the words you used. I could see everything you mentioned. While the boat is adrift on troubled waters, so too, is the person in it. Your words are descriptive and well chosen.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Your story reads well, Debra. The length is good for the words you used. I could see everything you mentioned. While the boat is adrift on troubled waters, so too, is the person in it. Your words are descriptive and well chosen.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Jan :) I appreciate it. Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from royowen
I think we all need to "get away", whether it be on a mountain top somewhere, or in any lonely spot and contemplate, otherwise we are flotsam abandoned on a lonely beach somewhere, beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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I think we all need to "get away", whether it be on a mountain top somewhere, or in any lonely spot and contemplate, otherwise we are flotsam abandoned on a lonely beach somewhere, beautifully written Debra, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, Roy for your lovely feedback :) I appreciate it. Best wishes as always, Debra
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Most welcome
Comment from Sherry Asbury
A fine piece of competition! You wrote something that touches my heart and makes me want to run to a boat! Sometimes the pull of all we have to do and cope with is horrendous...great writing for our new club.
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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A fine piece of competition! You wrote something that touches my heart and makes me want to run to a boat! Sometimes the pull of all we have to do and cope with is horrendous...great writing for our new club.
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Sherry :) I appreciate it. Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from lyenochka
Loved this! You wrote such poetic prose here and I could hear the "slap of the water" and the need for the vessel which gave out its all to finally breathe in peace and get some reprieve from the demands of life. So good to see you back!!
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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Loved this! You wrote such poetic prose here and I could hear the "slap of the water" and the need for the vessel which gave out its all to finally breathe in peace and get some reprieve from the demands of life. So good to see you back!!
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much, Helen :) It's lovely to be back, albeit briefly! I just have a half term break from work, so will be busy busy busy again from 1st November. There's just not enough hours in the day for all the things I want to do! Best wishes as always, Debra x
