Loving October
I'm always happy...9 total reviews
Comment from Mama Baer
Ohh! Somehow I missed this one! Another masterpiece. I love October, too! I often wonder if that is why I chose to come to earth in October, hehe. I also love the animated images you find! So cool.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Ohh! Somehow I missed this one! Another masterpiece. I love October, too! I often wonder if that is why I chose to come to earth in October, hehe. I also love the animated images you find! So cool.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much, you are so nice. I'm always glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from Toni Newell
Thank you for sharing. I love the poem and the way you have written it. Your thought feel genuine, great picture too. I like the rhyme and the second last stanza re your wedding.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Thank you for sharing. I love the poem and the way you have written it. Your thought feel genuine, great picture too. I like the rhyme and the second last stanza re your wedding.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this nice review, I appreciate it so much. :)
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You are welcome
Comment from WriterHeather
I love love love October! What an absolutely beautiful tribute to a magical time of the year. Halloween is my happy time! Thanks so much for sharing this creative and fun piece
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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I love love love October! What an absolutely beautiful tribute to a magical time of the year. Halloween is my happy time! Thanks so much for sharing this creative and fun piece
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Thank you fellow October lover...I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from zanya
It's a lovely poetic tribute to that month late in the year-October- when chilly days and longer nights return and we prepare to move indoors while we wait for winter
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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It's a lovely poetic tribute to that month late in the year-October- when chilly days and longer nights return and we prepare to move indoors while we wait for winter
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for this great review, i really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Mary Shifman
I adore this charming poem and I love the month of October, too. Your poem describes the beauties of the month very well. There isn't anything I can think of, off-hand, that I don't like about the month. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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I adore this charming poem and I love the month of October, too. Your poem describes the beauties of the month very well. There isn't anything I can think of, off-hand, that I don't like about the month. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this great review, its so appreciated. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent poem for October,
Fall is my favorite time also, unfortunately
it also ushers in the beginning of winter.
Excellent meter and rhymes,
as well as the wonderful presentation.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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You've written an excellent poem for October,
Fall is my favorite time also, unfortunately
it also ushers in the beginning of winter.
Excellent meter and rhymes,
as well as the wonderful presentation.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this great review. I don't like winter either but what can you do? Lol. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Word Junkie
Hello Author,
You did a great job with the visual here, orange font on the black background is a lot of fun and easy on the eye.
I enjoyed the poem and the many images it evoked--the harvest moon, pumpkins, corn mazes, etc. It's not necessary to punctuate every line so I urge you to read the poem aloud. Punctuation should have a purpose. Ask yourself what the purpose of that comma or this period is.
This is a great contest entry and I wish you success.
Write on!
~Lana
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Hello Author,
You did a great job with the visual here, orange font on the black background is a lot of fun and easy on the eye.
I enjoyed the poem and the many images it evoked--the harvest moon, pumpkins, corn mazes, etc. It's not necessary to punctuate every line so I urge you to read the poem aloud. Punctuation should have a purpose. Ask yourself what the purpose of that comma or this period is.
This is a great contest entry and I wish you success.
Write on!
~Lana
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and your helpful suggestion....I'll reresd it. :)
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a really good poem for the contest, good luck. I also think you have captured great imagery for the month of October. The imagery is something we can all relate to. Can not think of a thing to improve. Good Job.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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This is a really good poem for the contest, good luck. I also think you have captured great imagery for the month of October. The imagery is something we can all relate to. Can not think of a thing to improve. Good Job.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this terrific review, im so glad you liked it. :)
Comment from RodG
Your October poem spells out all the charms this month possesses: a change in colors and climate, harvested pumpkins, Halloween, and--in your case--an anniversary date. Although the rhythm isn't always consistent, I enjoyed this tribute to the tenth month. Rod
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Your October poem spells out all the charms this month possesses: a change in colors and climate, harvested pumpkins, Halloween, and--in your case--an anniversary date. Although the rhythm isn't always consistent, I enjoyed this tribute to the tenth month. Rod
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
