Next Monday
I'll start my diet...11 total reviews
Comment from Chrissy710
Ha ha boogienights This made me laugh next monday seems to always be the day to start the diet ga ha not Sunday but Monday
Have been overeating myself and yes just told my friend tgat next Monday I will start my diet or mire healthy eating plan
Loved your fun poem all true
Congrats on the win
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Ha ha boogienights This made me laugh next monday seems to always be the day to start the diet ga ha not Sunday but Monday
Have been overeating myself and yes just told my friend tgat next Monday I will start my diet or mire healthy eating plan
Loved your fun poem all true
Congrats on the win
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this terrific review. Yes, it's all true but I'm not going to worry about dieting...until next MONDAY! Halloween is coming up after all. :) Thanks so much for reading my poem.
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Next Monday ha ha
Comment from Patty Palmer
I think there are many of us who could say this poem is about them. Why is it so hard to watch the battle of the bulge? I lose ten pounds and then gain fifteen. I leave my shoes tied and slip my feet in because it's uncomfortable to have to bend over that far to tie them!
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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I think there are many of us who could say this poem is about them. Why is it so hard to watch the battle of the bulge? I lose ten pounds and then gain fifteen. I leave my shoes tied and slip my feet in because it's uncomfortable to have to bend over that far to tie them!
Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review, you are awesome. Everything you described is absolutely true, Sadly. :)
Comment from Mama Baer
Adorable! Love this take on your diet craze. Such a fun way to say it, that you begin a new diet every Monday! I can relate, for sure. Why is it that pounds pack on so easily yet are so very difficult to lose?? A mystery for the ages. :)
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Adorable! Love this take on your diet craze. Such a fun way to say it, that you begin a new diet every Monday! I can relate, for sure. Why is it that pounds pack on so easily yet are so very difficult to lose?? A mystery for the ages. :)
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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It is ! Thank you for this very nice review, it's always appreciated. :)
Comment from lauralumummu
I love this and can relate, Tried all those diets too. Noom is working for me the best thing I have ever found, Good luck in the contest. Laura. --------
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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I love this and can relate, Tried all those diets too. Noom is working for me the best thing I have ever found, Good luck in the contest. Laura. --------
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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I've heard of that...it's intriguing. I may have to look into it. Thanks for reading my poem. :)
Comment from LisaMay
I bet you really wish you were in the dessert aisle and left there for quite a while at your grocery store rather than on a desert isle! I cry the same regrets myself over a big mac from time to time.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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I bet you really wish you were in the dessert aisle and left there for quite a while at your grocery store rather than on a desert isle! I cry the same regrets myself over a big mac from time to time.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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You have that right! An island full of donuts if you please! Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
I love that you can talk about this issue with a bit of humor behind your words. I myself struggle with food addiction and weight loss. I have to say, if I didn't choose to laugh sometimes, I'd cry. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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I love that you can talk about this issue with a bit of humor behind your words. I myself struggle with food addiction and weight loss. I have to say, if I didn't choose to laugh sometimes, I'd cry. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for reading and for this generous review. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, you made me smile here with your love of food and you are in good company as many people struggle to break free from junk food and high calorie food. I have never thought that dieting works, to be slim and free of this cycle you have to re-think your eating regime and stick to it for the rest of your life, make changed for the better and enjoy the benefits, a well rhymed write and I adored the sentiments here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Ha ha ha, you made me smile here with your love of food and you are in good company as many people struggle to break free from junk food and high calorie food. I have never thought that dieting works, to be slim and free of this cycle you have to re-think your eating regime and stick to it for the rest of your life, make changed for the better and enjoy the benefits, a well rhymed write and I adored the sentiments here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this great review. I wish this was fiction, but alas my love affair with food continues....oh well. Thanks for reading my poem. :)
Comment from pookietoo
That is a nice poem about you can't stop eating. I have the opposite problem. I don't eat enough. Good luck in this contest. Have a wonderful night and weekend.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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That is a nice poem about you can't stop eating. I have the opposite problem. I don't eat enough. Good luck in this contest. Have a wonderful night and weekend.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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You look wonderful in your profile picture! Thanks so much for this nice review. :)
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You are welcome.
Comment from SimianSavant
Meter works, rhymes work, picture works. Nice work.
In a couple places your meter is stretched a bit, and is workable but could work better. Eg Do you have the same problem too? vs do you have this problem too?
Thanks for the read!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Meter works, rhymes work, picture works. Nice work.
In a couple places your meter is stretched a bit, and is workable but could work better. Eg Do you have the same problem too? vs do you have this problem too?
Thanks for the read!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this suggestion and for this great review.:)
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Mystery Author,
This was well done. I think that most of us suffer with the same problem. It's a burden that's hard to bear, and the worst part is that our problem is on display for all the world to see. We may all start losing weight if the store shelves keep getting depleted without restocking.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
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Hello Mystery Author,
This was well done. I think that most of us suffer with the same problem. It's a burden that's hard to bear, and the worst part is that our problem is on display for all the world to see. We may all start losing weight if the store shelves keep getting depleted without restocking.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, I really appreciate it. :)
