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A House Divided Can Not Stand

We're at a crossroads in this country

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This one-line poem, A House Divided Cannot Stand, meets the required word count restrictions and ponders the question: if we fail, who will emerge?

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2021
    Hello Bill-
    Thanks for the review and comments. For years we led the world in freedom. Our founding fathers would roll over in their graves if they could see what we've become.
    Blessings
    Tom
Comment from lyenochka
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Great question! Unless all the factions stop fighting and work together to build this country, it doesn't look good at all. It's all the false information hurled at each other. May God hear our prayers for healing for this country.

Congratulations on the win!!


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for your kind words and review. I'm afraid for this country, as many of us are. We used to be able to agree to disagree, but now it's as if we are two different people. I believe that what is happening is orchestrated by people who want to destroy this country, and we the people have got to put an end to it.
    Have a blessed evening.
    Tom
reply by lyenochka on 26-Oct-2021
    Amen. We can just keep praying. The use of the internet has both been a blessing (Bibles all over the world) and a curse (falsehoods proliferated through slanted media) May the Lord teach the children to be wise as they navigate the online world.
Comment from Annette R.
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Great question. Excellent picture. If more people asked themselves this question perhaps we would also realize we share one world and build unity. We will need to become glorious in spiritual degrees even as we have aspired to material degrees.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
    Thank you Annette for your review and comments. I agree that more emphasis needs to be put on true spiritual priorities. We've enjoyed great material blessing in this country because at one time we honored God Almighty. We've been blinded by the very blessings we received and put more value on them than on the one who provided them.
    Have a blessed day.
    Tom
Comment from Eunice Amero
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Only God can put the pieces back together. So if any of our countries fall God is the only answer. We have to depend on Him. Hes our only hope. Let us trust Him. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
    Thank you Eunice for sharing your thoughts and for reviewing this piece. How easily we forget how little power we actually have. All it takes is a natural disaster to realize that God is in control and we are powerless to anything about whatever is happening at the time. I hope that these trying times will draw us nearer to Him, and for some it will, for others it won't. Part of having free will.
    Have a blessed day.
    Tom
reply by Eunice Amero on 25-Oct-2021
    I agree. My son was away from God and l prayed and prayed for him and yesterday he was going to kill himself and God stopped him. He even ordered a bible yesterday and went to prayer meeting for the first time. You are so welcome.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
    Good Lord Eunice,
    So many young people are in such a state of distress these days. Thank God he had mercy and you and your family. God bless and keep you.
    Tom
reply by Eunice Amero on 26-Oct-2021
    Well thank you ever so much.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You contest entry, Mystery Author, plus your notes make a compelling entry. It is a scary time for the USA. I agree with you. We must act together to recover what we once had before it's too late. Great job with your entry.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
    Thank you Jan for your review and comments. I've read a number of your articles and know that you are a patriot as well. One thing is certain, we can't afford the luxury of being silent any more.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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America is going through a period of torment and self destruction just now and the world is watching. Without a good strong leader to guide and uplift the nation, they will continue to fall. I hope that the people vote wisely at the next election, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
    Thank you Dolly for your review and comments. I hope that we can have honest elections this next go around. The party in power seems to be intent on skewing the elections in their favor, and if the votes aren't tallied honestly, the result will be predictable.
Comment from Hitcher
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I can only comment as one From the outside looking in. Which relies heavily on the press reports obviously. You seem have one man to thank for that. he has stoked all the fires of discontent that he can and set everyone against each other in his insane attempt to hold onto power. It could force Europe to finally unite and stand as one... but I'm not convinced of that either. We live in chaotic times...

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    Thanks so much for your review and comments. I wish that it were just the president who was responsible for the trouble we're facing. There has been systematic chipping away at our republic for years, helped in part by greedy senators and congressmen who refuse to vote on term limits because they would have too much to lose. Our schools have become indoctrination centers, teaching our children to hate the very country they live in and sewing seeds of distrust. People have willingly stopped attending church, choosing instead to watch sports or whatever takes the place of God. We're on a down hill slide and we're accelerating to the bottom, and it's going to affect the whole world I fear. God help us all.