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Dance

Wedding poem for my youngest brother

7 total reviews 
Comment from royowen
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The best thing one can do for their nearest and dearest as a gift, is to write tributes for them, not everybody can, so well done in using your gift to bless your brother, a wonderful post my friend, well done, great post blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you Roy.
reply by royowen on 28-Oct-2022
    Most welcome
Comment from Maria Millsaps
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Nice sentiment poem. I thought the poem flowed very nicely with grace and poise. Perhaps a photo of a couple dancing, but not salsa dancing, more like a moon light dance entwined as one.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you .
Comment from robyn corum
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Justin,

What a precious, divine, and romantic piece! It not only honors your brother and new sister-in-law's moment this Saturday, it speaks to a lot of people first beginning that journey. It's so sweet!!

PLEASE give this to them ahead of time - they may want it read at the ceremony. OR - share it as a toast at the reception!

Thanks, my friend!

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
    Thank you Robyn.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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This is how a marriage should start - To become one with each other,
True lovers under Christ's control.
In wedded bliss to be made complete and whole.

So dance....- and I hope it will stay the same way no matter what.

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 01-Nov-2021
    Thank you.
Comment from kahpot
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What a beautiful poem and tribute for your brother on this his night, marriage can be a bit of a dance-but if both partners hold each other they will remain upright, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
    Thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
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A lovely poem, wishing every spiritual blessing and happiness for your young brother and his bride. You have offered it in love to him, and I am sure he will treasure it. I like the way you want him to whisper sweet affirmations to her, that she can treasure - moments of privacy and quiet amidst the big day's events. Well written.
Wendy

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
    Thank you.
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is a lovely sentiment for your brother and his wife-to-be. I like that you're asking them to focus on God's plan for their marriage and their future. May He richly bless them both. Enjoy the wedding. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
    Thank you Carol.
reply by Carol Clark2 on 24-Oct-2021
    You're welcome.