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An Annoying Itch

Sooo frustrating to have a itch you can't reach.

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Sooo frustrating to have a itch you can't reach.
An Annoying Itch
judelesemann Your so right with your one linear
it drives you nuts where you catch reach, like your upper back.
Gert

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thanks Gert.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
    Thanks so much for your review and remarks. So glad you enjoyed it. Be blessed, Jude
reply by Gert sherwood on 02-Jun-2022
    You are most welcome judelesemann Jude)
    Gert
Comment from CL Huth
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I will start by stating that poetry is subjective, so just because it doesn't hit with me, doesn't detract from its overall value.

I think we've all been in that place where the itch isn't easy to scratch, but the number of commas in here distract from the flow for me, like you took a stanza and scrunched it into one line. May I suggest something like:

It's on my back -- can't reach it! gonna drive me crazy! -- scratch, scratch, ahhhhh!

You don't need to add the itch to the line, because it's in the title (per the contest details).

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thanks CL.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
    Thanks so much for your review and remarks. Sorry you didn't enjoy it. Maybe my next one will light your fire !!! I like your itch line. Be blessed, Jude
Comment from Eunice Amero
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It is very frustrating to have a itch you can't reach. Sometimes I wonder why we weren't given and extention to our arms. lol. It will drive you insane. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
    Thanks Eunice.
reply by Eunice Amero on 13-Mar-2022
    You are welcome
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
    Yes, indeed. You hit the ball right out of the park. Be blessed, Jude
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
reply by Eunice Amero on 02-Jun-2022
    I agree. You are more than welcome
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2022
    Thanks so much for your review and remarks. So glad you enjoyed it. My husband has the longest arms ever...he is the one who gets all of the bites!
reply by Eunice Amero on 04-Jun-2022
    LOL He should cover them. You are very welcome.