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The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.

25 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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Aw. Ken and Analiese have finally confessed their love for each other. So is he showing up there? Is it safe? Will he take her to join the gathering at the hospital?
Hope Izard confesses to everything and that they can stop Alfanzi from manipulating any more police from within the jail.
Great job with this - it feels like the denouement of the book and things are about to be wrapped up soon.

 Comment Written 25-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments. Both mean so much. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal xoxo's
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Sal.

The detectives seem to be getting some time off with the dogs. The only thing that smells better than that new car smell is the new boot smell. The worst you did was get a new pair of boots. It appears that Izard is on his last leg And maybe he's ready for a deathbed confession about Tony. Anna is out of the woods for now too.

PAL Z

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the kind review of my book chapter, dear Z! Sal :))
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 26-Oct-2021
    You're welcome Sal.

    PAL Z
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Messy hair and pjs in the afternoon isn't necessarily a bad thing as long as the suitor didn't have to work or had gone fishing. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. LOL.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the kind review and comments, dear Ric. Sal :))
Comment from country ranch writer
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The bad guys are up the creek to the big house to stand trial for murders and will get their just due. Thanksgiving is upon
will them soon.
Hope Sally will be on the mend soon and able to go hometown king and be able able to relax and recuperate.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, dear Barbara. It means so much to me. Blessings to you always,
    Sal XOs...
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Comment from Father Flaps
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Hi Sally,
Time for a breather. Things are coming together now. I wouldn't be surprised if there's a double wedding ceremony... Miles & Suzy, and Ken & Analiese. Tony's off to prison. Eugene's almost dead. Mike and Miles are tuckered out. Dogs have all been fed.
I wonder, though, what will happen to Analiese? Surely, she will be charged with something. And what about Camille? I'm thinking there should be some kind of family reunion.
Nicely penned, Sal!
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous six star rating. I needed a breather in real life so it flowed naturally. My sister, Suzy, has Covid and at the same time is losing her husband to cancer. Hospice was just called in for him. Her comany has issued a vaccine mandate and she will lose her executive position if she doesn't comply. A heavy week for me.

    Thank you for your kind and gracious spirit. Writing is a wonderful outlet for me especially in these times.

    Sending you my best today as always, dear Kim,
    Sal XOs...
reply by Father Flaps on 27-Oct-2021
    I'm sorry to hear that, Sally. Covid isn't taking a breather, always active, always stalking another victim. We just learned today that there was a Covid exposure at AJ's Restaurant on Sunday. We weren't there that day, but we've had breakfast a couple of times since. We're regulars. But we better stay away for a while. Infection can happen so easily.
    Thinking of you, my dear!
    HUgs,
    Kimbob
Comment from Wendy G
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Another excellent write, as things progress on all fronts - solving cases, getting confessions, and in the realm of love. It is all coming together. Thank you for another fine chapter.
Wendy

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review of my book chapter, Wemdy dear. Blessings, Sal xoxo
Comment from WalkerMan
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This is a delightful chapter, giving us a break from the fast-paced drama of what once had been a cold case. Detectives Mike Lembowsky and Miles Jean-Baptiste get some much-needed rest and a filling meal along with Buddy and Samson; the Grand Jury had enough evidence to indict Tony Alfanzi in all three cases; you received a new pair of boots, which Suzy helped Dwayne Cooper choose, and he'll be attending the wedding between Suzy and Miles; and Ken Washburn shows up at Russ DeWoody's to visit Ana.

Superb, and aptly illustrated to express Ana's mood before Ken's arrival.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and super kind stars, Mike. A break was needed in the action. Don't worry, it picks back up. I thought it was high time for a little romance. Sending you my very best, and blessings always,
    Sal :))
reply by WalkerMan on 25-Oct-2021
    You are most welcome, Sal. You timed this break well, and the romance aspect is appreciated too. :)) -- Mike
Comment from royowen
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Things are progressing with the blind girl on the mend and the others working toward solving and bringing to Justice. Eugene Izzard is reputed to be near death, and they are hopeful of a confession from him. Great episode Sally, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, Roy. Blessings always,
    Sal XOs...
Comment from Sankey
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Another great chapter. All gussied up for Thanksgiving, ha. Keep it all coming. Still a great read. Not sure if there is still drama ahead? Good work. Always enjoy your stuff. No spags.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars. It means so much! No spags? Wow! Most of all, I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Blessings always,
    Sal XOs...
Comment from Judy Lawless
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This is a great chapter, Sally. It's nice to have some happy things going on after so much drama, and a love story is the best, after hearing that there is plenty of evidence to convict Alfanzi. Your hint of him still working from prison is a little disturbing though.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review, dear Jidy. Blessings always,
    Sal xoxo's