Running Blind
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25 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Have you ever heard the song, Boot Scootin'? I was thinking how fitting it was that I mention this song when the recovering lady got her new boots. I will continue reading....catching up.....
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Have you ever heard the song, Boot Scootin'? I was thinking how fitting it was that I mention this song when the recovering lady got her new boots. I will continue reading....catching up.....
Comment Written 14-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much again for catching up and for the wonderful review. Blessings always, Sally XOs
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, that was lovely! I loved the description of Ana from Ken! Lol. I was going to give you a six, but I'm saving it for the next part, this is just so exciting! I'm hoping that Eugene Izard will tell all and save his soul in the next part! This has been a brilliant book, Sal, I know I keep saying it, but it's true. I'm sorry I got so far behind, but with back pain, and sorting Betrayal out, my mind couldn't cope with much more. The up side is, I didn't have to wait to continue! Lol, Well done again, my clever friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Aww, that was lovely! I loved the description of Ana from Ken! Lol. I was going to give you a six, but I'm saving it for the next part, this is just so exciting! I'm hoping that Eugene Izard will tell all and save his soul in the next part! This has been a brilliant book, Sal, I know I keep saying it, but it's true. I'm sorry I got so far behind, but with back pain, and sorting Betrayal out, my mind couldn't cope with much more. The up side is, I didn't have to wait to continue! Lol, Well done again, my clever friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and generous stars. That is so appreciated. Sending my very best to you and yours as always, dear Sandra,
Sal XOs
Comment from Gloria ....
Ugh, the smell of weeks-old tuna salad is enough to turn a person off their hunger, at least momentarily. lol
All is however recovered with the scent of pumpkin pie, and the upcoming Thanksgiving.
As is your signature, Sally, the plot moves forward at a good pace, with a dash of humour, and good food which belongs in every story in my opinion.
Very nicely done, indeed. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Ugh, the smell of weeks-old tuna salad is enough to turn a person off their hunger, at least momentarily. lol
All is however recovered with the scent of pumpkin pie, and the upcoming Thanksgiving.
As is your signature, Sally, the plot moves forward at a good pace, with a dash of humour, and good food which belongs in every story in my opinion.
Very nicely done, indeed. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the awesome review and generous stars. You surprised me and blessed me abundantly. Sending you my very best, sweet Gloria,
Sal xoxo
Comment from BethShelby
I love the way everything is working out. You have the love element as well as the solving of case. I"m late getting t this one as I had some personal issures with a son getting married and a trip out of town but I really enjoy reading your stories.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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I love the way everything is working out. You have the love element as well as the solving of case. I"m late getting t this one as I had some personal issures with a son getting married and a trip out of town but I really enjoy reading your stories.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. I?m so glad you?re enjoying my story. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs
Comment from Cindy Warren
It looks like everything is working out the way it should. Tony and his crew will be where they belong, and there might be another wedding in the near future.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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It looks like everything is working out the way it should. Tony and his crew will be where they belong, and there might be another wedding in the near future.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. It is so appreciated. Sending along my very best to you and yours always, Sally XOs
Comment from Liz O'Neill
The reader will be drawn in with this description, however you will keep them wondering what it was: "The sumptuous spread arrived and everyone was fed until they could hold no more. For a moment, life had slowed, cupboards were restocked, and a resemblance of normalcy had returned." This sounds like Karma: "He has a bacterial infection. The doctor doesn't think he's going to make it." This was a nice episode.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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The reader will be drawn in with this description, however you will keep them wondering what it was: "The sumptuous spread arrived and everyone was fed until they could hold no more. For a moment, life had slowed, cupboards were restocked, and a resemblance of normalcy had returned." This sounds like Karma: "He has a bacterial infection. The doctor doesn't think he's going to make it." This was a nice episode.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful comments and excellent review. So glad you?re enjoying this. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs
Comment from MAMONIA
This chapter certainly made me smile. I am so happy for Analiese that she is safe and in love. What a great catch this was for the good guys.
It was pleasant news to know that you are recovering and doing well in the hospital. Thanksgiving won't be the same, but Her loved ones will surround sally.
I enjoyed this chapter very much and look forward to the next.
My best,
Marie
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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This chapter certainly made me smile. I am so happy for Analiese that she is safe and in love. What a great catch this was for the good guys.
It was pleasant news to know that you are recovering and doing well in the hospital. Thanksgiving won't be the same, but Her loved ones will surround sally.
I enjoyed this chapter very much and look forward to the next.
My best,
Marie
Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous stars, dear Marie! I'm so very blessed! Sending you and yours my very best,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Janetsue
This is such a sweet ending: Ken caught sight of her and smiled. "It just so happens I love a girl with messy hair and wears flannel pajamas in the afternoon...." (He is definitely my kind of guy!)
I am looking forward to the wedding...hope it is part of the story. If not, I have a really good imagination. lol This is another beautiful chapter, Sally. :-) xoxo
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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This is such a sweet ending: Ken caught sight of her and smiled. "It just so happens I love a girl with messy hair and wears flannel pajamas in the afternoon...." (He is definitely my kind of guy!)
I am looking forward to the wedding...hope it is part of the story. If not, I have a really good imagination. lol This is another beautiful chapter, Sally. :-) xoxo
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the super kind review and star shine, dear Janet. I'm doubly blessed. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from robyn corum
Sally,
Oh, yeah, girl. I can relate to an all-day pajama day! I love 'em! But they are just far too rare around here. hahahaha
This chapter read really well, very smoothly. As always, the plot is intriguing and captivating. Never know where you're headed, which keeps the interest level high.
Some notes for your consideration - which you are welcome to use or discard, as you like:
1.) beginning with the sensationa(l)ized double murder
--> hahaha not sure anymore. My auto-correct kept correcting it before I could show what was wrong. Just go see about it?
2.) "Outside, or in your head(?)" Russ asked, digging deeper.
3.) "Analiese smiled as she twisted the phone's cord around herself in
--> no quote mark here
4.) I love a girl with messy hair and wears flannel pajamas in the afternoon...."
--> I love a girl with messy hair (who) wears flannel pajamas in the afternoon...."
Thanks!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Sally,
Oh, yeah, girl. I can relate to an all-day pajama day! I love 'em! But they are just far too rare around here. hahahaha
This chapter read really well, very smoothly. As always, the plot is intriguing and captivating. Never know where you're headed, which keeps the interest level high.
Some notes for your consideration - which you are welcome to use or discard, as you like:
1.) beginning with the sensationa(l)ized double murder
--> hahaha not sure anymore. My auto-correct kept correcting it before I could show what was wrong. Just go see about it?
2.) "Outside, or in your head(?)" Russ asked, digging deeper.
3.) "Analiese smiled as she twisted the phone's cord around herself in
--> no quote mark here
4.) I love a girl with messy hair and wears flannel pajamas in the afternoon...."
--> I love a girl with messy hair (who) wears flannel pajamas in the afternoon...."
Thanks!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Thank you SO much! Floating quotes from where I moved stuff are a buggar! I don't see them anymore. Sending you my very best and blessings always,
Sal XOs
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Fantastic storytelling! The wheels of justice are nearing their mark. And you are becoming more and more of a romantic, Sally Law! So Analiese and Ken have a thing now, too?
I just have one suggestion:
"You betcha! I'll need to book a place near the interstate though ...
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"You betcha! I'll need to book a place near the interstate though, ...
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I can't believe the dogs are satisfied with dog food while the people are eating "Buddha's Feast," but in the world of fiction and trained K-9's, these things can happen!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Fantastic storytelling! The wheels of justice are nearing their mark. And you are becoming more and more of a romantic, Sally Law! So Analiese and Ken have a thing now, too?
I just have one suggestion:
"You betcha! I'll need to book a place near the interstate though ...
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"You betcha! I'll need to book a place near the interstate though, ...
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I can't believe the dogs are satisfied with dog food while the people are eating "Buddha's Feast," but in the world of fiction and trained K-9's, these things can happen!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2021
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Dear Mary Kay,
Thank you for the lovely review and super stars! I'm so very blessed. Your kind critique is much appreciated. My portfolio is full of love stories, long before you met me. I hope to publish those too someday. Walkerman is on me about those, reminding me to get them published. So glad you're enjoying this. Sending you my best today and love and blessings always,
Sal xoxo's
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You're very welcome, my dear friend. Is "Walkerman" a fond nickname you have for Jackson? How sweet!
I do hope you get around to publishing your love stories and romances. I can remember reading some of them, which I think were presented as letters.
Love and prayers, Mary Kay xoxo
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Walkerman is here on FanStory. He reviews my work. He especially likes the blind girl mysteries. ;)) XOs
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It's great to have an avid FAN on FanStory! I must not have encountered him much, on this site before. xoxo
