Family First
In my life it's always...8 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
First of all the presentation.is great. Really nice. Family is obviously very close to your heart. Your poem conveys that quite well. Always remember there are those who may be alone and include them.sometimes on special Holidays
Xoxo C.G.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
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First of all the presentation.is great. Really nice. Family is obviously very close to your heart. Your poem conveys that quite well. Always remember there are those who may be alone and include them.sometimes on special Holidays
Xoxo C.G.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for this very nice review, I'm so glad you liked it. :)
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You are most welcome
Comment from Wendy G
You are blessed to have such a close and supportive family. You have expressed this well and smoothly in your poem. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
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You are blessed to have such a close and supportive family. You have expressed this well and smoothly in your poem. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this great review, it's so appreciated. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I reckon there is nothing more important than our family as we need them to support us in our hour of need, your acrostic praises their worth here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2021
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I reckon there is nothing more important than our family as we need them to support us in our hour of need, your acrostic praises their worth here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem, it's always appreciated. :)
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a lovely acrostic poem with the perfect picture. You call family a gift from God and I certainly agree with you. And in your poem you have praised them for all they do for you. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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This is a lovely acrostic poem with the perfect picture. You call family a gift from God and I certainly agree with you. And in your poem you have praised them for all they do for you. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your nice comments. :)
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A very nice acrostic poem for the contest. It reveals very clearly your love of your family and the family as the most important thing in your life. Good luck in the contest. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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A very nice acrostic poem for the contest. It reveals very clearly your love of your family and the family as the most important thing in your life. Good luck in the contest. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
I absolutely love this acrostic you have penned for the contest! I agree 100% family should always come first. My heart breaks for those who grow up with now family
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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I absolutely love this acrostic you have penned for the contest! I agree 100% family should always come first. My heart breaks for those who grow up with now family
Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you for this excellent and insightful review. :)
Comment from Terry Broxson
A good poem for the contest. Good luck. I have read some of your other work, I know your style and its good and creative. This poem presents good imagery and heart felt happiness. I would give you this input, I think the line "Rejoicing" might be stronger with either replacing Rejoicing or Joy at the end. The sound to me is a little redundant, and that is not true for the rest of the poem. It is just a thought, You are a good author, so I defer to your decision. Good Job.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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A good poem for the contest. Good luck. I have read some of your other work, I know your style and its good and creative. This poem presents good imagery and heart felt happiness. I would give you this input, I think the line "Rejoicing" might be stronger with either replacing Rejoicing or Joy at the end. The sound to me is a little redundant, and that is not true for the rest of the poem. It is just a thought, You are a good author, so I defer to your decision. Good Job.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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It's interesting that you should say that because I had a different word there before. I changed it at the last minute but I do believe you are right! Thank you for this excellent suggestion. :)
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you are welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Acrostic Poem Contest writing prompt entry speaks what and how your family is, and family has to care and look out for you as you are supposed to devote to the God's gift family; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. October, Festive, Flood Fearing, Watery Month Here! ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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This Acrostic Poem Contest writing prompt entry speaks what and how your family is, and family has to care and look out for you as you are supposed to devote to the God's gift family; well said, well done; thanks for sharing, happy reviewing this; God Bless you, my good writer, post more, dear. October, Festive, Flood Fearing, Watery Month Here! ALCREATOR
Comment Written 20-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my poem and for this great review. :)
