Comment from pookietoo

Excellent

Interesting entry for the one line contest. I wish you lots of luck in this contest. Keep writing great poems. Have a wonderful weekend and take care.

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Pookietoo,

Thank you so much for your sweet review and encouraging words. Much appreciate your time to read and assess my work :))

Have a wonderful weekend,
Senyai

reply by pookietoo on 29-Oct-2021

Welcome.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

very clever word play with this fabulous one line poem. Very good play on words could be a winner in the contest good luck and well done best regards meia xx

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Meia,

Thank you kindly for such an encouraging review and thoughts on my one line offering. Much appreciated!

Have a great weekend :))

Senyai

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

I there anything that is failsafe and foolproof these days? One can only hope for a better tomorrow. What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Mike,

Thank you for a wonderful review and encouraging words on my one liner!

No, only a presumptuous fool would believe anything could be completely error free LOL :))

Always,
Senyai

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

I enjoyed this one liner entry for the contest.
It is playful with the words of foolhardy and foolproof.
Not only that, for seven words, the sentence 'fools' around
with alliteration... lol.. I hope that came out right. Well done
on this entertaining read and good luck in the competition.

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi DD,

Oh thank you so much for your lovely and encouraging review of my silly one line poem?(can we really call one line a poem in the true sense of the word? Lol). Anyway, I had fun with it. Thanks again and your kind words are much appreciated.

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi DD,

Oh thank you so much for your lovely and encouraging review of my silly one line poem?(can we really call one line a poem in the true sense of the word? Lol). Anyway, I had fun with it. Thanks again and your kind words are much appreciated.

Always,
Senyai

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Ha, ha, ha I like the failsafe foolproof methaphor - Not being foolhardy, my failsafe is foolproof.. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Deleanu,

Oh, I am so tickled you enjoyed my silly short one line offering. Glad you appreciated the alliteration and play on words, too :))

Thank you for a stellar review,

Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Deleanu,

Oh, I am so tickled you enjoyed my silly short one line offering. Glad you appreciated the alliteration and play on words, too :))

Thank you for a stellar review,

Senyai

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

Not being foolhardy your project is fool proof.that is a smart idea for a one liner poem.i liked the pun on the word fool.all the best for the contest.

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Sanku,

Thank you most kindly for such a stellar review. Tickled you enjoyed my silly one liner. Much appreciate your time to review and assess :))

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Sanku,

Thank you most kindly for such a stellar review. Tickled you enjoyed my silly one liner. Much appreciate your time to review and assess :))

Always,
Senyai

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

Things may not turn out to be one's expectation even though one puts in one's best efforts to deliver. No one is perfect. One should not be too disappointed if not perfect.

Your poem is well said : "Not being foolhardy, my failsafe is foolproof.'

Relaxation is the best medicine for life events.

Thanks for sharing.

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi GoodadviceChan,

Oh I so agree. That?s why I take naps, lol. Relaxation is uber important in my book.

Thank you for such a thoughtful and perceptive review. Much appreciated :))

Always,
Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi GoodadviceChan,

Oh I so agree. That?s why I take naps, lol. Relaxation is uber important in my book.

Thank you for such a thoughtful and perceptive review. Much appreciated :))

Always,
Senyai

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

' Project Failsafe', short, succinct and deftly descriptive. Woven through each short line are the golden threads of truth. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck in the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Duchess,

Good to hear from you, my friend! Is it still baking you down in Aussie Land? Wishing cooler weather for you.

Love your review and thoughts, Duchess. Thank you kindly!

Stay cool down there :))

Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Duchess,

Good to hear from you, my friend! Is it still baking you down in Aussie Land? Wishing cooler weather for you.

Love your review and thoughts, Duchess. Thank you kindly!

Stay cool down there :))

Senyai

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Senyai,

It's always good to hear from you too my friend.

You certainly deserved both.

Staying cool here is getting more difficult :)))

the Duchess

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Senyai,

Yes it's getting closer to baking down here !!

I'm doing my best to stay cool :)))

the Duchess

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Great artwork and
nice presentation, Senyai.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-I like the topic for your monostich.
-Effective alliteration and very creative.
-I like how you present ideas to think about.
-A good entry; good luck.

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Pam,

Oh my, what a warm and welcoming review! Tickled you like my one liner.

Thank you kindly as your words are always greatly appreciated, Pam. I value your input as it come from such an accomplished writer :))

Have a great Friday,
Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Pam,

Oh my, what a warm and welcoming review! Tickled you like my one liner.

Thank you kindly as your words are always greatly appreciated, Pam. I value your input as it come from such an accomplished writer :))

Have a great Friday,
Senyai

reply by Pam (respa) on 29-Oct-2021

You are very welcome, Senyai, and I appreciate your reply. I enjoy your writing and you have a great Friday, too.

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

Interesting art work and interesting monostitch. I do love seeing what writers can do with these one liners. Yours shines with creativity and careful word selection.
Good luck in the contest.

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Debbie,

Good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your stellar review and encouraging words on my very succinct and (did I say short?) poem. Lol
If one can even call one line a poem :))

I appreciate your input and appreciate your time to read and assess. Thank you.

Senyai

reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021

Hi Debbie,

Good to hear from you! Thank you kindly for your stellar review and encouraging words on my very succinct and (did I say short?) poem. Lol
If one can even call one line a poem :))

I appreciate your input and appreciate your time to read and assess. Thank you.

Senyai