Project Failsafe
The three Fs of Safety -42 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Good point, my friend, I haven't been here in a while yet when I came back to FS I found you next to the top of the Welcome page!
I can't tell if you are leaving us here on FS but I hope that this isn't the case! I don't consider you foolhardy as you write in this brief poem, so let us get together once again!
The image is great and you say you found it on Google, it suits the poem well!
Senyai, I don't know you well, but for all I can tell, you may have a hidden talent in your bones! You are an accomplished poet ranked just # 30 on this listing, I hope you are planning to stay!
Have a wonderful day,
Jesse
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Good point, my friend, I haven't been here in a while yet when I came back to FS I found you next to the top of the Welcome page!
I can't tell if you are leaving us here on FS but I hope that this isn't the case! I don't consider you foolhardy as you write in this brief poem, so let us get together once again!
The image is great and you say you found it on Google, it suits the poem well!
Senyai, I don't know you well, but for all I can tell, you may have a hidden talent in your bones! You are an accomplished poet ranked just # 30 on this listing, I hope you are planning to stay!
Have a wonderful day,
Jesse
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Hi Jesse,
Thank you so much for your sweet review and words. No, I am staying on FanStory, it is Gert that might be taking a break from FS for a while. Her husband just got home from the hospital and she needs to care for him right now. But a little bird told me she will check in and review from time to time.
Thanks, Jesse, for your concern but I?m fine and am wishing you a wonderful Sunday and coming week :))
All the best,
Senyai
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you used these alliterative "F" words, two which included "fool" in your one line poem! Ironically, it's "foolhardy" to think one is never foolhardy and so to make that be the basis of the failsafe plan. A wise man always expect some amount of failure. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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I like how you used these alliterative "F" words, two which included "fool" in your one line poem! Ironically, it's "foolhardy" to think one is never foolhardy and so to make that be the basis of the failsafe plan. A wise man always expect some amount of failure. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Hi Helen,
I love your review and yes, you are spot on! Only a presumptuous fool would think his plans would be completely error free.
What is that saying ? " expect the best but plan for the worst"? or something like that :))
Thank you for your time to read and assess my short one line poem.
Have a wonderful Sunday
Always,
Senyai
Comment from Dawn Munro
Well, as one line poems go, there really aren't many to give this one any competition, methinks... It is witty and well written, as well as cleverly presented. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Well, as one line poems go, there really aren't many to give this one any competition, methinks... It is witty and well written, as well as cleverly presented. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Hi Dawn,
Thank you so much for a lovely review and warm thoughts. I truly appreciate your time to read assess. These one liners are so short there is not much there to assess LOL!
Have a wonderful Sunday :))
Senyai
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I am so sorry for my late reply -- you're very welcome.
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No problem!
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely written. Of course a few risks won't be of any concern should the failsafe prove to be safe.
The three Fs is a perfect title too for this in that it alludes to those perhaps less than perfect grades.
Innovative, unique, and totally relatable.
Great luck to you with the Committee. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Very nicely written. Of course a few risks won't be of any concern should the failsafe prove to be safe.
The three Fs is a perfect title too for this in that it alludes to those perhaps less than perfect grades.
Innovative, unique, and totally relatable.
Great luck to you with the Committee. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Hi Gloria,
Love your review. Thank you as always for your insight into my work. This one didn?t have to have much insight into it being one crazy line LOL.
I appreciate your input and time :))
Take care,
Senyai
Comment from Gert sherwood
The three Fs of Safety -
Project Fail safe
Senyai a great way of saying only a fool would believe nothing is fail safe I wonder what are the FS of Safety
Gert
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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The three Fs of Safety -
Project Fail safe
Senyai a great way of saying only a fool would believe nothing is fail safe I wonder what are the FS of Safety
Gert
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Hi Gert,
Thank you for such a interesting review! Yes, only a fool would think his plans were completely error free :))
Always so good to hear from you. Take care.
Always,
Senyai
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Senyai you are most welcome
Gert
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Senyai
You are most welcome
Gert
Comment from mermaids
I admire your use of the letter "F". Your one line poem has a smooth flow to it and you also give good advice here. You did well creating a one line poem which is not easy to do.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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I admire your use of the letter "F". Your one line poem has a smooth flow to it and you also give good advice here. You did well creating a one line poem which is not easy to do.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Hi Mermaids,
Oh thank you for such an encouraging review! Means so much to have your valuable input and thoughts :))
Have a great weekend,
Senyai
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
One line that says it all, except what your fail safe is, and how is it foolhardy?? LOL. I love this, it's clever and the alliteration is brilliant. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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One line that says it all, except what your fail safe is, and how is it foolhardy?? LOL. I love this, it's clever and the alliteration is brilliant. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Hi Sandra,
Many thanks! So tickled you like my crazy one liner. I had fun thinking it up lol? much appreciate your valuable input and thoughts.
Have a wonderful weekend,
Senyai
Comment from rspoet
Hello Lynn,
This is a wonderful one line poem
with excellent word play and use of alliteration.
Perhaps it is foolhardy.
It's difficult to say much poetically in a single
but you've done very well.
I like the choice of art work too.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Hello Lynn,
This is a wonderful one line poem
with excellent word play and use of alliteration.
Perhaps it is foolhardy.
It's difficult to say much poetically in a single
but you've done very well.
I like the choice of art work too.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Hi Robert,
So tickled you like my crazy one liner. I had fun thinking this one up lol.
I so appreciate your input, Robert? means so much. Thank you! :))
Have a great weekend,
Senyai
Comment from Cogitator
when the moon sits just so in the sky. That must have been when you wrote this cute post. How many times has my wife asked me to not act like a fool? I cannot tally. Nice job...John
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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when the moon sits just so in the sky. That must have been when you wrote this cute post. How many times has my wife asked me to not act like a fool? I cannot tally. Nice job...John
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2021
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Hi John,
Oh thank you! I so appreciate your valuable input on my silly one liner. Tickled you like this one. Means so much!
Have a great weekend :))
Senyai
Comment from Wendy G
A very clever one line entry - filled with alliteration and provoking thought as to whether anything can ever be fool-proof - or fail-safe, despite all the precautions we can make. Good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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A very clever one line entry - filled with alliteration and provoking thought as to whether anything can ever be fool-proof - or fail-safe, despite all the precautions we can make. Good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Hi Wendy,
Good to hear from you! Yes, I agree wholeheartedly LOL. Only a presumptuous fool would think his best laid plans could ever be completely error free.
Someone wrote about the terrible event in the 1940?s with two young physicists tinkering with a "demon core" of plutonium at Los Alamos and slipped with a screwdriver and somehow dislodged it causing a burst of radiation to escape its confines and killed them both in two separate accidents before it was dismantled. Tragic loss if life! When I hear the word failsafe I think of this very accident? or the unsinkable Titanic?sinking :((
Thanks for such a stellar review!
All the best,
Senyai
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Hi Wendy,
Good to hear from you! Yes, I agree wholeheartedly LOL. Only a presumptuous fool would think his best laid plans could ever be completely error free.
Someone wrote about the terrible event in the 1940?s with two young physicists tinkering with a "demon core" of plutonium at Los Alamos and slipped with a screwdriver and somehow dislodged it causing a burst of radiation to escape its confines and killed them both in two separate accidents before it was dismantled. Tragic loss if life! When I hear the word failsafe I think of this very accident? or the unsinkable Titanic?sinking :((
Thanks for such a stellar review!
All the best,
Senyai
