Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

God advice in this acrostic and I enjoyed every word, we should show kindness to each other and make more friends in the process, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2021

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

This is a nice cheerful poem and full of good advice. I've always loved the "Random Act of Kindness" philosophy and try to practice it. I wish you good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2021

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice artwork and
presentation.
-You wrote a very
good acrostic with
effective meter, examples,
rhyme, and imagery.
-The tone is positive as
you "send nastiness on its way!"
-You follow that with many
ways to show kindness and
the message about equality.
-You have a very good entry; good luck!!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2021

Comment from Eunice Amero

Excellent

Don't I ever agree. This is a well written poem. I enjoyed it and I like the colour. Thank you for sharing your poem. It's worth reading and listening to.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2021

Comment from Yardier

Exceptional

What a wonderful poem, rich with truth. This poem should be a poster in every young persons bedroom or dorm. Heck, it should be on the walls of restaurants, school boards and waiting rooms. Quick, start selling it on E-bay and all the other online outlets. Good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2021

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

Very nicely done! This is spot on for the Acrostic Poem Contest, one of the volets of which is kindness. I think your entry with its attractive appearance should do well.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2021

Comment from James Milici1

Excellent

Couldn't have been said any better. Simple, honest and sincere. The poem alternates between hopeful and wistful. I wish more people would take these sentiments to heart.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2021