Forever Freedom
Use these words. Joy, graphic. death spice2 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I'm impressed that you could create this poem of so few words that uses all those required words. Yes, Death can create both "eternal freedom" for the one who leaves this life but also "Pain and strife" for those remaining in this world.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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I'm impressed that you could create this poem of so few words that uses all those required words. Yes, Death can create both "eternal freedom" for the one who leaves this life but also "Pain and strife" for those remaining in this world.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Helen, for your kind comment and high rating. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I've never thought of death bringing joy and my experience is that it has only brought me grief and strife, although death did bring joy to my Grandma, she was glad to leave this earth and asked us all to please let her go, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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I've never thought of death bringing joy and my experience is that it has only brought me grief and strife, although death did bring joy to my Grandma, she was glad to leave this earth and asked us all to please let her go, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2021
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Thank you for your continued support, Dolly.
Joan
