Wondrous State of Being
Love is need for one to be truly happy.3 total reviews
Comment from Henry White II
Very good piece of work. It captures the essence of what you deem love to be. ( I also agree). I especially liked this couplet.
Love can be out-spoken, but can also thrive in gentle silence
Just being with a loved one in quietude is a cherish treasure
Nice entry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
Very good piece of work. It captures the essence of what you deem love to be. ( I also agree). I especially liked this couplet.
Love can be out-spoken, but can also thrive in gentle silence
Just being with a loved one in quietude is a cherish treasure
Nice entry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and the encouraging feedback.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love is indeed a powerful emotion, it can move mountains and destroy someone's resolve, but we all dabble in it and hope to find true love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
Love is indeed a powerful emotion, it can move mountains and destroy someone's resolve, but we all dabble in it and hope to find true love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the read and review, Dolly. As always appreciated.
Comment from Terry Broxson
A nice entry for the contest, good luck. I like the way you make it more than just an individual, by bringing family and friends into it. I also like the
gentle quiet you bring to love as you are with someone. I have a poem here on site about losing that love to death, so the flip side of my quiet is your quiet. Nice Job.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
A nice entry for the contest, good luck. I like the way you make it more than just an individual, by bringing family and friends into it. I also like the
gentle quiet you bring to love as you are with someone. I have a poem here on site about losing that love to death, so the flip side of my quiet is your quiet. Nice Job.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the read and review. Sorry about the sadness you have suffered.