Comment from Henry White II

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this. This is a very tender loving writing. It delves into what love actually looks like in practice. "It is our deepest
sympathies to everyone
of us,
we are together always
by hearts and minds."
Also "Helping each other through thick and thin. That is the committed unconditional love that ll human beings seek. Good job.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2021

Thank you!

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the contest, and good luck with the contest. I like the way you have used the love in a family to get your points across. I came from a small family, and am the last survivor, but my wife's family was large, and I can see where you are coming from. Good Job, I can't think of a thing to suggest for improvement.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021

Thank you!

Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .

Excellent

Once again I am wild this was touching this was beautiful written I liked it from the beginning today and it was captivated thank you for sharing this my friend keep being motivated and stay

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2021

Thank you!