Comment from lancellot

Excellent

I think this is very beautiful. And, being biased is sometimes a good thing. When you have such a wonder in your life. A blessing, then you have the right and the honor to be biased with all your heart. What better purpose for your talent?

Well done proud grandpa.

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 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Lance, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a great job with your poem for your sweet granddaughter's birthday, Roy. I enjoyed reading it. Your words to her are positive and straight from your heart. Your poem has smooth flow, good rhymes, and great meaning for her and her future. The picture is awesome.
Respectfully, Jan

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 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Jan, for these wonderful comments, review and stars, blessings Roy